I didn't really like it at first, but after thinking about it. You made a politcal point, with subtle words and phrases you captured the way Harry is viewed in the world. This is excellent and I truly enjoyed after a few moments thought. Well done.
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Who was the dark-haired man? I know know who everyone else is but...the man and the woman who shot them. MORE INFO NEEDED
was it just some random chick who was killing them all? good story though. i love all the stories you write!
her prejudice is atrocious.....but in our society, that's how it is. Your story was excellent,a real thriller. A lot like scream though.....being killed in small groups to keep the suspense. Awesome though....I coudn't help wondering.....Was Hermione, Ron , Harry and the rest of the gang including Dumbledore the people she killed? If so, that is very interesting.....prejudice kills Harry Potter........Anyway stories that get me thinking deserve a 10.....so that is obviously what ur getting.....a 10....great job
Author's Response: yes that is who she killed. Snape was the last to die..and his death was the most grusome...simply because I adore torchuring him!