This is an awesome story. I'm gonna add it to my favorites. I thought it was funny how James was so happy, you don't get to see him like that alot :) Keep up the great work and update soon!!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm on someone's favorite list now? Yippee! Thanks a lot!
oh me, oh my that was great...i am sorry, but i don't think i can participate in your challenge, but something alond the lines of lily and snape, but anyway, this was great....update soon...and uhhhh hooray for updates!
Author's Response: Chapter Four will soon be in queue, I've still gotta submit it... (oops!) I'm glad that you like it! Thanks a lot!
I loved it! Oh my gosh, James is great. Sooo Funny. *laughs* Jumps up and down and all over the place- maybe he really had gone mental. Hahaha. Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one. God Bless! *laughs some more* Oh, I loved the spell by the way!
I loved it! Oh my gosh, James is great. Sooo Funny. *laughs* Jumps up and down and all over the place- maybe he really had gone mental. Hahaha. Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one. God Bless! *laughs some more* Oh, I loved the spell by the way!
Author's Response: Hi Emmi! Yeah, I laughed when I wrote that one. I was just thinking, "Now won't James be excited when Lily accepts?" And that Prongs-has-gone-mental part seemed so like Sirius! Well, I'm so glad you liked it, God bless to you too!
i love the serious sirius! it's siriusly cool! haha, sry, bad pun. anyway, great start, can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: thanks a lot! "siriusly cool"...good one! thanks for reviewing!
Sirius is so cool but I think that Lily began to like James too quickly. But thats okay, I guess. Maybe you should tell uos more about how she began to like him and all. That'd be tight. You are amazing, update soon!!!
Author's Response: thanks for the review and the advice! yeah, i agree, they got together kinda quick, but it used to be a lot worse. (earlier i left out the whole train scene.) thanks a lot! hope you enjoy!
wow your story is great. I really like the dance thing cause its different and very creative... awesome story!
wow your story is great. I really like the dance thing cause its different and very creative... awesome story!
Author's Response: thanks! yeah, i liked the dance thing myself...great review! thanks a lot!
That was so awesome! I loved it! Yeah, I agree that it's more "normal" for Remus to be the one Lily talks to, but I like this because it's differant :) I really like this story a lot!! Keep writing!
Author's Response: thanks a lot! i'm glad that you like it! chapter 3 is on the way!
by the way when i read the summary i thought that the maruder would be remus!!!!! nice twist!!!!!!
Author's Response: yeah, it seems like a lot of people thought of remus. i don't know, i just wanted sirius to be the good, understanding guy this time. thanks!
that was awsomely(is that a word?) amazingly(is THAT a word?) WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more i need more!!! must.have.more!!!!!!! there is nothing to improve on in this story(execpt more chapters) more.need more!!!!!!!1
Author's Response: lol! chapter 3 is on the way, and thank you for your very enthusiastic response! by the way, amazingly is a word, but i'm not sure about awesomely...*checks online dictionary*...nope, doesn't exist in the dictionary, but on fanfiction, hey, why not?! glad you like it so far!
Hey! I liked that chapter, it was really cute. I like the way that Lily decided to trust Sirius with that information, and he was "serious" about it, unlike his label, which is a crazy, loopy sugar high kid. I relly liked the whole thing so far, even if Lily's mind works straaanngggeee. lol
Author's Response: lol too! yeah, this chapter was definitely fun, and you'll see how it works in the next chapter, which is in queue and being approved! yay!
I really liked taht chapter! I loved how she trusted Sirius with her secret, and I loved taht they were still dancing even though the music had stopped. Great job, update soon!
Author's Response: thanks a lot! yeah, this chapter was fun to come up with, even though it was a little sad on both sides (family problems), but i'm glad you like it! chapter 3 is on the way!
That was so sweet. Better than the first chapter. :)
Author's Response: thanks! glad you like it!
Kehehe. I love it. It is alot more "sirius". I think Lily started to love James a bit too fast, but i guess it all works. update whenever you want, it was slendid!
Author's Response: thanks a lot! yeah, sorry about that "lily-suddenly-likes-james" thing, but it used to be, like, "lily-and-james-have-hated-each-other-for-eternity-and-suddenly-she-likes-him." thanks a lot, and i also eagerly await the rest of your story!
Hahaha! That was really funny and cute. "Not that far down, Mr. Nimmons!" That was great! Awaiting your next update, Jade
Author's Response: yeah, i loved that line too! thanks for reviewing, 3's on the way!
Hey, that was really good! I like how you ended the chapter. James seems a lot different in this story than in others. On to the next :). -Jade
Author's Response: thanks a lot! chapter 3's on the way!
lurve this! U only got a nine rating b'cause im pissed dat u havent updated yet! UPDATE OR DIE!!!!!!
Author's Response: whoa, hold your horses! chapter 3 is in queue, i can only do so much at one time! thanks for reviewing!
Yeah, Sirius had a little more attention that usual, but it's not overly done. Nice tough with the learn-fast spell. Sorry, I'd write more, but I have to go to school. :)
Author's Response: thanks a lot! yeah, it's right before school for me, too. technically i should be writing in my journal or drying my hair...yeah, thanks again!
That was really sweet! I'm not sure if Sirius knows how to shut his mouth for more than 10 seconds but you never know. I was really surprised when I saw that your fic was updated 'cause I wasn't sure if it was like a one-shot kinda thing but I'm really glad that it's a story! Please update soon.
Author's Response: thanks bunches! chapter 3 is in queue, so you'll be able to see how sirius does in a little while. thanks again!
