Reviewer: marauder_madxxx
Date: 01/31/06 10:02
Chapter: A Fight and a Fright

U boy or girl??? Coz i neva thought lads could write gud stories til i saw 1 on hpff!!! I won da challenge!!! Uhuh, go me, i rock!!! lol

Author's Response: *laughs* I'm a girl, of course! You know, viola-girl? Whatever. I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: GWeasley
Date: 01/30/06 13:54
Chapter: A Fight and a Fright

The biging was frustrating sinc you skiped so much time but this last chapter was realy good can't wait for the next chapter (none of any of the updates have been posting fast enough) :)

Author's Response: You're very right, they niver post updates in time. Bkut i'm glad you like it, and chapter five is on the way!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/24/06 18:43
Chapter: A Fight and a Fright

I hate Snape!!!!! I hate him, I hate him, I hate him!!!! Let's see, a werewolf, plus two people=trouble. A lot of trouble. Can't wait to see how they get themselves out of it. Update soon!

Author's Response: Well, they will get out of it somehow, I mean, how else could they get married and stuff. Chapter five is on the way! Thanks!

Reviewer: swish_and_flick
Date: 01/23/06 23:09
Chapter: A Fight and a Fright

my goshness. hurry up and add a new chapter?omg. is james gonna transform and reveal his secret 2 lily? whoa, dude. HURRY!

Author's Response: Guess you'll have to wait and find out, won't you? Sorry that I can't tell you, but cahpter five is on the way if that's any reassurance. Thanks!

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 01/23/06 21:52
Chapter: A Fight and a Fright

Dun dun dun. Poor Lily! Getting attacked by that biatch Snape. Ooo I hope Remus doesn't hurt anyone. Please update soon, it's getting very exciting.

Author's Response: Exciting, you say? Well, glad to hear it! Yes, chpater five is coming soon. Thanks!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 01/23/06 18:26
Chapter: A Fight and a Fright

oh me oh my, this is so intense, what will they do????? oh no!!!!!! james must save lily though and reveal the secret!!!!! anyway, update soon!

Author's Response: Lol! Glad you like it! Chapter five is on the way! Thanks!

Reviewer: Evik
Date: 01/23/06 11:04
Chapter: A Fight and a Fright

Very good chapter. I liked how James tried to make Lily go to the castle. And to your question: I think James will somehow save Lily (he'll transform, I guess) and as a result, Lily will deeply fall in love with James. I guess she'll find out the "Marauders' secret" as well. Well, I am not good at guesses, so I'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out if I am right. Btw, I am glad you update so soon. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Btw, if you haven't checked the story lately, I canceled the contest, so...yeah, sorry about that. But chapter five is on the way!

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 01/23/06 6:32
Chapter: A Fight and a Fright

Oh, well, I think lily is ready to just throw her arms around James and fall madly in love....hehehe. Great chapter, and I understand know your second A/N. ehhe whoops.

Author's Response: Fall madly in love, you say? What am I here for? Don't worry, they'll love each other soon enough! SEe ya, gurl!

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 01/23/06 6:29
Chapter: A Fight and a Fright

Well, that was great, of course, I still like "Duck!". Splendid. Oh,You should fill out who won the contest because it looks like I won. Which I didn't; I didn't even know there was a contest last chapter. I also just forgot what the contest was for this chapter. *goes back to check*

Author's Response: Thank you very much, m'dear! So glad you like it, even though by now you know what happens. Whatever. Sorry I haven't emailed you in a while, by the way. I'm going to bed in like *checks clock* five minutes, I"m just trying to answer a few reviews since it's been forever. *guilty grin* God bless!

Reviewer: fire_temper
Date: 01/23/06 5:16
Chapter: A Fight and a Fright

good . marevelous. excellent. amazing. super. awsome. shockingly good. does that tell you enough????

Author's Response: That's plenty good, thanks much!

Reviewer: harry_potter_star
Date: 01/23/06 4:47
Chapter: A Fight and a Fright

hehe I love this story soooo much, I just love it...Id like to see how this turns out! But how on earth would ducking help them escape a werewolf? lol update soon!

Author's Response: Well, you'll just have to find out! Thanks for the review, you rock!

Reviewer: Draco_is_hot
Date: 01/18/06 2:18
Chapter: Evsdrona

umm here an idear they can argue and that turns in2 a dule (i suck at spelling) and lily get badly hurt and has to miss the ball and james stays with her and misses the ball as well and thats when lily confeces her fellings for james and they kiss and date then get married and u kno the rest from the wonderfull books of Jo Rowling!!! well um yer thats my idear hope u like!!!

Author's Response: Hmm...interesting theory! And who cares about spelling, I mean, really. Thanks for your support!

Reviewer: Jade Green
Date: 01/17/06 19:56
Chapter: Evsdrona

Haha, that was good, but it was short :(. But I really like the second chapter, I thought that was really, really funny. Good job! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Sorry it was so short, but chapter four's gonna be a lot longer, and it's on the way!

Reviewer: marauder_madxxx
Date: 01/16/06 12:06
Chapter: Evsdrona

Snape tries to hex lily and james comes to the rescue? Ur story rocks!!! As i say 2 evry1 UPDATE OR DIE!!! i like u really.

Author's Response: Update or die? I guess I'll have to update then! Chapter four is in queue! Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: lily_n_jms r mnt 4 eachoter
Date: 01/15/06 14:41
Chapter: Evsdrona

ooo ooo ooo I LUV!!! this story!!!!! sorry. Took her a while! Oh and answering your question... very bad things!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: *laughs* I'm glad you like it! Chapter four is in queue. Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: honeydukeschoclate
Date: 01/14/06 19:04
Chapter: Evsdrona

Wow! Good job! James reaction rocked! I also love his little confession he made to his friends about how much he loves her *wipes away tear*. Okay, about the challenge...I think a little duel might be in order for the Slytherin/Gryffindor arguement! UPDATE QUICKLY!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Awesome feedback! Chapter four is on the way!

Reviewer: violagirl
Date: 01/14/06 14:55
Chapter: Evsdrona

Hey, look at me, I'm leaving myself a review! Thanks to all of you for your support!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/14/06 10:58
Chapter: Evsdrona

That was so good! I loved the Eavesdropping spell. It really helped Lily understand. I have to agree with Sirius, James has seemed to have gone mental. Let's see, Could Lily and Snape have an argumnet of sorts, then James just happens to overhear an come to the rescue? I know, it's weird. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Yeah, James has gone kinda crazy, but wouldn't you if the person you loved most suddenly loved you back? Chapter Four is on the way! Oh, and thanks for participating in the contest!

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 01/14/06 6:29
Chapter: Evsdrona

Haha loved it! James was so awesome in that chapter! I loved how you made an eavsdropping spell. Can't wait for the next chapter. Sorry I can't do the challange (I am really not good at making stuff up, that's why I read other peoples)

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Yeah, that eavesdropping thing was pretty cool, I guess. Chapter Four is on the way!

Reviewer: fire_temper
Date: 01/14/06 5:53
Chapter: Evsdrona

that was HILARIOUS!!!!!! update update update!!! i can honestly say that i can think of nothing you can do to improve. update soon!!!!

Author's Response: Heh-heh! I thought it was pretty funny too, I actually laughed while I was writing it...Great to hear that I don't need to improve anything! Chapter Four is on the way!

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