Reviewer: Hp_Pal_007
Date: 04/22/06 19:38
Chapter: In the Eyes of Death

great poetry its sad ti think that its harry though *cries* ( he just cant die)

Reviewer: mcclure_512
Date: 12/15/05 17:32
Chapter: In the Eyes of Death

Very good, especially considering that it's your first published on MNFF, I believe. It started out okay, then just got better as I went along. I especially liked the last and 3rd last stanza's (not sure why though.) and it looks like you've shown lots of talent. Anyways, I encourage you to keep writing and improving!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I don't really do much poems, but I wanted to get down something quick, becuase I didn't wanted to be empty handed for a month! Lol. Thx for your comment!

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