Reviews For The Beast of a Man
Reviewer: moonflower 767
Date: 01/01/08 16:59
Chapter: A Christmas Present...

Ohhh very nice! Are there any sequels possibly coming? Btw, what's his brother's name? Not Romulus! (maybe something average, like Brian, Fred, or Wulfric;) OOOh i loik the last one ! i am so smart! SMRT! crikey! good job!

Reviewer: fire_temper
Date: 01/05/06 10:23
Chapter: A Christmas Present...

loved it but when are you going to update? in would hav review'd sooner but im a new member!!!!!! MORE !!!!! :):):):):):):):) =]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=] :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 12/18/05 17:19
Chapter: A Christmas Present...

Good first chapter. I think you should have mentioned how he got the diary- the summary was more of a prologue. Still I like what you've got here. Its excellent. I think you need to bring up the writing to a little more of a stand-out level, if you know what I mean, but that should improve with time. Great job. This story has so much potential, and I'm looking foward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: thank you, your review is very inspiring! I'm writing chapter two now, and i hope it'll meet your expectations

Reviewer: Miss Italy
Date: 12/15/05 22:18
Chapter: A Christmas Present...

I really like this so far. Is it a one shot or a novel length story? Either way, it's really good. I liked how you portrayed each of the characters (James, Sirius, Peter, Lily, Dumbledore, Remus' parents, and expecially Remus). Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: thank you! I'm planning to write more of it, but this first chapter really seems to be fine on its own, isn't it? But I'm writing chapter two now, and I'll try to have it up before the MNFF holiday break.

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