Wow I really liked that chapter but was a little surprised that they left the Dursley's so soon! Great Job!
I absolutely love your story.... that was an wonderful beginning ( it was NOT too long) GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!! next chapter here I come......
wowwww!
That was unexpected!
But strangly, I loved it!
Ron better do something soon!
Update! Update! Update!
ouch. thats a harsh cliffhanger!
it's good though, keep going!
OMG! I NEVER THOUGH OF GODRIC'S HOLLOW BEING RELATED TO GRYFFINDOR!!! YOU JUST GAVE ME COMPLETELY NEW INSIGHT! AHHH, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
btw the story is pretty good too! keep going!
*gasps*
Well that might stir up a little drama. I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!
I'm liking this so far, especially Ron's "Don't you touch her." - that was so sweet!
uh, oh. that can't be good. ron better get a move on or it will be the yule ball all over again!
Oh my gosh girl, can I just say, YOU TOTALLY ROCK? You're such a good writer and SO DARN YOUNG! How do you do that?? Anyway - I honestly wouldn't have started to read your story had I noticed that it wasn't complete. Typically I only read one-shots and if I do decide to read chapter stories, they have to be completed before I read them. It must have been fate then that I didn't noticed that your story was still being written. I just sat for the past hour and read chaps 1-10 and it's such a good story! It could seriously be right from the 7th book. LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT. Keep up the good work and know that I'm waiting for the rest with baited breath! :)
Well that was quite the unexpected ending.
Will R/Hr ever stope fighting and get together?
Will Harry ever stop being noble and take Ginny back despite the dangers?
I Have Read The Hole Thing And I Loved It!!!
-LibertyV
I wonder myself if there's anything more to Mr. Smythe ..... Nice chapter. Please update soon!
This pretty good. I can't wait for the next part. How man chapters do you think you'll write?
Hey! Good story except a tiny little thing only french speaking readers would notice: Bill definetly isn't Fleur's 'fiancée', or else there allways has been less to him than met the eye.'fiancée' is the feminine for 'fiancé'...darn french...
Great! Lovin' it so far.
w00t! Bilius is a kewl middle name!
Update soon! ur story is great!
xoxo
grednforgesgirl
hmmm....you make woman out to have mystical powers we don't have. Or maybe I'm just half-guy and i don't realize it. Whatever. lol.
xoxo
grednforgesgirl
wow. i really like your story, keep up the great work!!! haha Bilius...UPDATE!!!
