Reviews For The Wedding
Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/11/07 14:20
Chapter: Chapter 9

George does need a little love, doesn't he? Although I do agree with Mrs. Weasley that he is going a little fast. Can't wait to see what trouble Krum causes. :D

~~Lluvia~~

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/11/07 14:08
Chapter: Chapter Eight

Yay! Fun, mushy stuff is great! Loved this chapter!

~~Lluvia~~

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/11/07 14:00
Chapter: Chapter Seven

“Well, since my parents are Muggles, I’m quite fond of Muggle weddings. Of course, the ceremony will be a magic ceremony, but I want to wear Muggle wedding clothes. I want a dress with a large skirt, white, with beads and pearls. And I want the ceremony to be at night. The aisle will be lined with candles. Hundreds of candles. And there will be a type of awning where I’ll stand with R- with my husband,” Hermione covering her very obvious mistake, blushing furiously, but she seemed to know that if she stopped speaking, what she had started to say would become even more evident. Ron had not heard her slip up; he was talking to Mr. Weasley about Apparition. Hermione continued,

I love this bit! Of course Ron doesn't notice, but it would have been pretty funny if he had. Nice job :D

~~Lluvia~~

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/11/07 13:53
Chapter: Chapter Six

This proves it: Mothers know all! I swear, it seems like they know everything! Very good chapter. :D

~~Lluvia~~

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/11/07 13:46
Chapter: Chapter Five

“You see what we mean, Harry? Insatiable appetite for knowledge. That’s our Ron! So run along.” George urged, with a shooing motion.
I love that line! You captured the twins (and everyone, for that matter) perfectly! Although, I'm seeing a bit of deja vu. The Harry/Ginny thing is almost exactly like the Remus/Tonks thing before Remus gave in. Makes sense, though. Good job! :D

~~Lluvia~~

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/11/07 13:37
Chapter: Chapter Four

Hmmm... George gong with a Muggle. Probably the one he mentioned that likes his card tricks. Cool, though I agree with Harry: I can't see them married. Of course, Fred and Angelina make a cute pair. Whatever floats their boats. :D

~~Lluvia~~

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/11/07 13:30
Chapter: Chapter Three

Ron is so clueless! I love the conversation Harry and he have at the end. That was my favorite part. Very nicely done! :D

~~Lluvia~~

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/11/07 13:25
Chapter: Chapter Two

Nice job! Just thought you might want to know of two little mistakes I found. Nothing big, but if this were my story I would appreciate it all the same:

“I’ve never seen Ron so angry before,” Hermione’s voice was shaky as she spoke, “This is one step up from trying to fight Malfoy. I didn’t know he had the aptitude to keep calm like that and give a warning. I always thought he’d just jump into a fight. IT must be everything that’s happened just sort of…combusted. That’s the only explanation I can think if.” IT should be 'It', and 'if' should be 'of'.

So, without further ado, I shall move onto the next chapter! lol :D

~~Lluvia~~

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/11/07 13:16
Chapter: Chapter One

That was typical of Ron to think that his mum was waking him up and not Hermione. I'll bet he was dreaming about Hermione, though. lol Nice chapter!:D

~~Lluvia~~

Reviewer: lilybobily7
Date: 05/25/07 21:03
Chapter: Chapter 10

no! hermione needs to be with ron! still very good story though :)

Reviewer: hplover213
Date: 04/28/07 22:07
Chapter: Chapter 10

great story. keep it up!

Reviewer: Diagonallyfanatic
Date: 04/17/07 22:03
Chapter: Chapter Five

that was an excellent ending toan awsome chapter !!!

Reviewer: Llama lady Lily
Date: 04/14/07 22:20
Chapter: Chapter 10

oh that was mean
that was really mean!
you can't leave cliffhangers like that!

Reviewer: Llama lady Lily
Date: 04/14/07 20:44
Chapter: Chapter Two

awwww

Reviewer: Llama lady Lily
Date: 04/14/07 20:44
Chapter: Chapter Two

awwww

Reviewer: kataang2
Date: 04/09/07 23:32
Chapter: Chapter Seven

it was cool

Reviewer: ron_hermione_DUH
Date: 04/09/07 19:28
Chapter: Chapter 10

KILL KRUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DIE KRUM DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHERE IS RON? HE'D PROBABLY JUST HIT VICKY IN THE HEAD WITH A SHOVEL!!!!!!!!! THAT WOULD BE AWSOME!!!!

Reviewer: ron_hermione_DUH
Date: 04/09/07 19:00
Chapter: Chapter Seven

I LIKED THIS QUOTE "PITIFULL CHAPTER"!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mrsginnypotter13162
Date: 04/01/07 12:38
Chapter: Chapter 10

yah i like it but can u plz write more i need to no wahts going to happen and its takeing just way to long but there really good u should keep writing

Reviewer: mrsginnypotter13162
Date: 03/08/07 17:40
Chapter: Chapter 10

cool but are you going to write more?????

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