George does need a little love, doesn't he? Although I do agree with Mrs. Weasley that he is going a little fast. Can't wait to see what trouble Krum causes. :D
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Yay! Fun, mushy stuff is great! Loved this chapter!
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“Well, since my parents are Muggles, I’m quite fond of Muggle weddings. Of course, the ceremony will be a magic ceremony, but I want to wear Muggle wedding clothes. I want a dress with a large skirt, white, with beads and pearls. And I want the ceremony to be at night. The aisle will be lined with candles. Hundreds of candles. And there will be a type of awning where I’ll stand with R- with my husband,” Hermione covering her very obvious mistake, blushing furiously, but she seemed to know that if she stopped speaking, what she had started to say would become even more evident. Ron had not heard her slip up; he was talking to Mr. Weasley about Apparition. Hermione continued,
I love this bit! Of course Ron doesn't notice, but it would have been pretty funny if he had. Nice job :D
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This proves it: Mothers know all! I swear, it seems like they know everything! Very good chapter. :D
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“You see what we mean, Harry? Insatiable appetite for knowledge. That’s our Ron! So run along.” George urged, with a shooing motion.
I love that line! You captured the twins (and everyone, for that matter) perfectly! Although, I'm seeing a bit of deja vu. The Harry/Ginny thing is almost exactly like the Remus/Tonks thing before Remus gave in. Makes sense, though. Good job! :D
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Hmmm... George gong with a Muggle. Probably the one he mentioned that likes his card tricks. Cool, though I agree with Harry: I can't see them married. Of course, Fred and Angelina make a cute pair. Whatever floats their boats. :D
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Ron is so clueless! I love the conversation Harry and he have at the end. That was my favorite part. Very nicely done! :D
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Nice job! Just thought you might want to know of two little mistakes I found. Nothing big, but if this were my story I would appreciate it all the same:
“I’ve never seen Ron so angry before,” Hermione’s voice was shaky as she spoke, “This is one step up from trying to fight Malfoy. I didn’t know he had the aptitude to keep calm like that and give a warning. I always thought he’d just jump into a fight. IT must be everything that’s happened just sort of…combusted. That’s the only explanation I can think if.” IT should be 'It', and 'if' should be 'of'.
So, without further ado, I shall move onto the next chapter! lol :D
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That was typical of Ron to think that his mum was waking him up and not Hermione. I'll bet he was dreaming about Hermione, though. lol Nice chapter!:D
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no! hermione needs to be with ron! still very good story though :)
that was an excellent ending toan awsome chapter !!!
oh that was mean
that was really mean!
you can't leave cliffhangers like that!
KILL KRUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DIE KRUM DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHERE IS RON? HE'D PROBABLY JUST HIT VICKY IN THE HEAD WITH A SHOVEL!!!!!!!!! THAT WOULD BE AWSOME!!!!
I LIKED THIS QUOTE "PITIFULL CHAPTER"!!!!!!!!
yah i like it but can u plz write more i need to no wahts going to happen and its takeing just way to long but there really good u should keep writing
cool but are you going to write more?????
