Simply brilliant! Your writing is quite mature beyond your years! Keep them coming!
yeah! you updated! it wasn't horrible at all-updateupdateupdat!
that wasnt a horrible chapter at all, you seem to capture all the emotion so well. i really love this story.
Hermione sees herself marrying Ron? Loved the slip she did!! And Harry....how come he tortures Ginny and himself??? Stupid noble git! Update soon!
I don't care how crappy a chapter is if it's an update. Not that this chapter was crappy or anything. It was great! Once again, I must say that yoou're the awesomest author ever because you update alot. And quickly. I can't wait for the conversation!
Another great chapter. Ican't wait for an update. The whole Ginny and Harry thing is great.
i don't know what you're talking about i liked the chapter. I also like how you are one of the few authors that actually update frequently. i really like the harry and ginny part. All i can say is UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE. keep up the good work
update now plz!! and y do we hav 2 wait so long for them to start the jorney and some how make ginny come along to! lol
I really like your story so far. Please Update quickley! I liked this transition chappie. The slip up was very clever! Hopefully they will all come to their right minds soon about whom they love!
I thought you did a great job with this transition chapter. It was funny and entertaining and pegged teenage angst! Hermione's slip was funny and the prospect of the four of them in the open air, by themselves leaves alot to the imagination! This didn't seem like you threw it together to update quickly at all. You hid it well!
Thanks for the new chap, dont worry we forgive you. loved Hermione's slip. Hope Ron will get the message soon. Update soon!
Good chapter, the Ron slip was funny, and rather cute in my opinon=) Can't wiat for the next chapter!
Great chapter! I thought the Ron slip up was histarical, and then the twins making fun of the 4 of them. Great job and update soon!
I thought the Ron slip up was really quite funny. I Can't wait to see the next few chapters come out!
Good job, looking forward to updates... Fred and George were their usual selfs. R/Hr/Krm should be interesting, that is if he even shows up. Keep it up! ~Patrony :)
Way to go Ron!! Interesting that Dudders took a liking to Hermione. I think this chapter might work better with the last, only because it would finish it out and bring the readers back to the flashlight incident of the opening. But that's neither here nor there, just a thought. Well done, reading on. ~Patrony :)
I really like the begining of your story. It seemed plausible, like it would be something that could really happen and the way it was written, it kept the tone of HBP. Love Mr. & Mrs. Weasley and Hermione's comment about 6 years of wizarding training was priceless. Well done, looking forward to the next chapter. ~Patrony :)
This story is marvelous. I really like your style writing. Everything just falls together. You make it too easy, but in reality, I know that it is harder then it looks. You could do well in a career should you choose to go that route. I’ll bet your teachers love your stories. I like it so much, I think I’ll read it again and again. Thanks
I love this story! You have such a fluid writing style that really supercedes your age (I was shocked to discover you're 16). Congrats on a great fic - I can't wait until Chapter 7 :).
Just finished reading the 6 Chapters that you've written, and i have to say your work is absoultly brilliant. Keep the Updates coming!!!