OHMYGOD. krum better run for dear life cause rons gonna come after him with a few wisely chosen spells... MORE!!!!! THAT WAS AWESOME! but it should really be a ron/hermione cause there really wasnt any harry/ginny
your story so far has been GREAT!!!!!!Please update soon. i'm dieing here!!
Amazing, simply amazing. I applaud you, you are a great writer. Just remember to watch out for typos and grammatical errors.
Amazing, keep working on correcting those typos.
Extremly good. I did not notice as many typos in this chapter.
Extremly well written, continue working on spelling and grammer.
Amazing, you are a very talented writer. Please continue to work on spelling mistakes, also some grammatical tuneup would be good.
Nice, love how you displayed Harry's "hero" side. Remember to check for typos and spelling mistakes.
Funny, very funny. Ron still cannot see what is right in front of his face. Work on fixing your spelling mistakes and typos.
Nice, very nice. I really like how you portrayed Ron. Keep working on fixing those spelling mistakes and typos!
It was very good. Nice emotional displays in differant parts, it also shows how grown up Hrry, Ron, and Hermione have become. Watch for spelling mistakes.
ooh! hahah ron better hurry it up then!
you got a talent for this, so keep writing!
i think you should add more chapters to this cuz it is really good and i like it
love the story but the ending put me off. are you going to add more to the story?
Agh! Another Cliff-hanger! But the whole story has been really good! Really well-thought-out! I like it a lot, and I can barely wait for the next chapter! Oh! It's so exciting! I was waiting for the wedding, but I also hope that Harry and Ginny get back together. I am relying on the fact that Hermione and Ron are for sure getting back together, because if they didn't, that would kinda ruin the whole story. But it is really good! I hope you'll like my story. It's a Hermione/Ron Harry/Ginny one, too. But it's really fluffy. It has some plot. but mostly just fluff. It's in the queue, but I would be so grateful if you read and commented on it. I need some input, because so far the only one who has read it is my brother, and since he's a boy (no offense boys, but all you girls will know what I am talking about), he really didn't have anything beneficial to the story to add. Sorry I've been so chatty, but that's the way I am. Oh, well.
Katie
wow this story is awesome. nice cliffie!
Amazing chapter...n this is my first review ever after having read tonnes of fan fics,so i guess it speaks volumes about my admiration for the writing style.
oh my gosh. you have to hurry and finish this fic, it's awesome! i'm hooked!!!
Whoa! Plot twist! Please update soon; this is really good. *shakes head* Krum just had to come when Ron and Hermione were about to get together. Oh well. Please update soon so that I know what happens. Honestly, I may die of anticipation.
~~Lluvia~~
