Nice start, I like it. Thankfully it doesnt start with how Lily despises James. Update soon. 10!
Author's Response: Thank you! Apparently people liked that Lily doesn't hate James in this fic, which is awesome. Chapter 2 is already in queue!
this is a pretty good start! i'll be glad to review, i know what it feels like when no one leaves any. great beginning! can't wait for chapter two!
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot to me! It's been a while since I've had any reviews, so this is very good news, it means that someone is still reading my fic. Thanks once again!
i love it..!! i could even picture the whole thing happening... its really good! cant wait to read chap. 2!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Great story!! Great spin on the whole J/L ship! I never thought that Lily would like James secretly suppose it makes sense! Write more please!!
Author's Response: I thought it would be better to change it up a little, since Lily is always hating James. Thanks for your review!
I really liek this story! I like the fact that Voldemort is finally mentioned. I haven't come across one, until now, that did. And, I like that Lily likes him, but says no. It is really good, please update soon! 10/10!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Well, I know that Voldemort becomes super powerful at this time, so I'm trying to put that in this fic. The second chapter is almost in queue, I just have to put the finishing touches to it. Thanks again for your review!
THANKYOU!!! Finally, another story that Lily doesn't hate James in!! :D YOu don't know what a relief that is!! Fantastic story, can't wait for an update, really good start!! Keep going!! You're doing a great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! It helps a lot that someone likes my story!