Reviews For Why Potter?
Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 03/10/06 22:36
Chapter: Doubt

Hye, I really liek the end, it was good! UPdate soon!

Reviewer: Shaurya
Date: 03/10/06 5:25
Chapter: Doubt

Well looking at the title of the story, here's waht I think will happen :

Lily will ask James why he wants go out with her. If what hesays about her is right, why does he think she's so good. Making sense?

And James replies witht hat typical - your hair's like fire, you're the only girl who can satnd up for herself .. blah blah!

Right? Wrong? Waiting for the next chappie :)

Author's Response: First of all: thanks for taking the time to review. Next: you could be close, or you could be really far. Anything could happen, since I'm not really done. It's awesome that you actually took the time to think about it, though: thanks!

Reviewer: lubug
Date: 03/09/06 20:53
Chapter: Doubt

Hey! I really liked this story! And i thought that QUIDICH FAN's idea was preety good. If you havent already come up with the next chapter then maybe you should take it into consideration! I totally think that lilly should finally say YES! But ya... make sure its not a pitty date or else it will totally kill the hole idea... Ya know? So yea... i really liked this story! PLEASE MAKE SURE TO UPDATE SOON! =D

Author's Response: Hmm... I think I already know what is going to happen, and I'm telling you, you are all going to be surprised. If she says yes, the story is pretty much over, and if she says no, James will be devastated. It is pretty hard. Thanks for reviewing!!! I'll update as soon as I'm done with chapter four.

Reviewer: lubug
Date: 03/09/06 20:51
Chapter: Doubt

Hey! I really liked this story! And i thought that QUIDICH FAN's idea was preety good. If you havent already come up with the next chapter then maybe you should take it into consideration! I totally think that lilly should finally say YES! But ya... make sure its not a pitty date or else it will totally kill the hole idea... Ya know? So yea... i really liked this story! PLEASE MAKE SURE TO UPDATE SOON! =D

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 03/08/06 19:41
Chapter: Doubt

tough question, lily could say yes, but then it would be a pity date, and that is no good. i think she should say no, then about a while later she will realize what she has done and come around and confront him. i think that lily's personality is one that will never agree to go out with him unless the feelings were returned. did that make sense? anyway, this is great. oh yeah, if lily says no, then i think there must be a deal or something instead of a date, they just study or hang out, or maybe, if she says yes, then they can get detention for something that james did and there she can realize that she really does like him...yes that is my plan. but do what you want, becasue you are the author. anyway, kudos, so update soon!

Author's Response: You are right about Lily's response. And the deal idea is good, I must think about it...:) Hopefully Lily's personality will change, though, butnot as in a pity date, because I don't write pity dates. NO way. Well, thanks for leaving such a long review anyways, I loved to hear what you think! And now I'm off to think about your suggestion... Thanks!

Reviewer: Black Witch
Date: 03/04/06 12:34
Chapter: Worried

I think that it is a great story, so keep writing and, of course, keep updating! Don’t let your loyal readers to wait!!! =D by the way 10/10 =D

Author's Response: Hey there! Thank you, thank you, thank you! Chapter 3 has been submitted once again, so hopefully this is the one... :)

Reviewer: fantasygirl7
Date: 02/26/06 21:02
Chapter: Worried

I thought it was great. I have no idea where it is going but I like it all the same. I can't wait for chapter 3

Author's Response: Hello! Thanks for thinking it was great, and for leaving a review. I haven't had one in a while. Chapter 3 is still in queue, unfortunately, and has been for about two months, but it'll get here eventually. Oh, and don't worry. I have a plot. :)

Reviewer: Fly to Dawn
Date: 02/09/06 5:00
Chapter: Worried

Great story so far! I loved the tension with Lily/James. I escpecially LOVE the Marauders.....haha, yes, I would really love to make a banner for this ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll PM you back right now about the banner!

Reviewer: MagikalMe
Date: 02/03/06 18:06
Chapter: Worried

Plz update soon... i really liked your story!! please update!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! My third chapter's is queue already, because it had some technical difficulties, so I made some changes to it, and submitted it again. It'll come up soon, I promise!

Reviewer: Alex_Riddle
Date: 02/02/06 18:46
Chapter: Rejected

I LOVE the way you picture the characters, a very very original fic... not from that overused point of view of 'Lily hates James, who is her stalker and is depressed over the fact she won't date him' Awesome! I just really like the way you use thoughts and speech to compare what they say and what they think. Now reading chapter 2! <333 Alex. Btw. Thanks for all of that stuff in your profile! I am so proud of you! =D

Author's Response: Thanks "Alex!" I really appreciate your long review! Well, you know me, I've got to make it original, at least a little, right? I mean, I can't jsut do what everyone else does, can I? That would so not be me. Thoughts are great! I think a lot, and I think that what goes through people's heads is usually never uttered, so thoughts are many times more important than words.

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 01/29/06 8:56
Chapter: Worried

wow, that was great...very new and different. i loved how lily loves james, it is such a nice change.....anyway, this is great and you should and uhhhh yeah, this is great.

Author's Response: Thanks! chapter 3 is in queue since Thursday (1/26), so I'm sure that it'll be validated soon enough!

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 01/26/06 21:31
Chapter: Worried

Oh, thank YOU so much :). Yeah, Trickster's Choice and Trickster's Queen are my favorite! I will await the next chapter eagerly ;D. Hopefully it'll be up before Sunday, when I leave for a month! Love ~ Jade

Author's Response: Yeah, it's too bad Daughter of the Lioness books are over! I think chapter 3 is going to be validated on Monday, though, since I submitted it on Thursday.

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 01/26/06 15:04
Chapter: Worried

Hey, I never would've thought this was your first fic unless I'd read your personal info, lol. Very, very good. I also love Tamora Pierce...which is your favorite? Yes, please put chapter 3 up soon! You're in my favorites!

Author's Response: Thanks again! It's awesome when people review, even more awesome when it's twice! You're in my favorites, too, for The Redhead Legacy, which is great! My favorite Tamora Pierce book, hmm... the Alanna books and the Daine books, though Daughter of the Lioness ones are also very good. Chapter 3 is in queue!

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 01/26/06 14:57
Chapter: Rejected

Oh my gosh, I'm in love with this version of Lily and James! I love how you kinda didn't have much dialogue, but you explained everyone's feelings extremely well. I have to find out who that black haired girl with blue eyes is :). On to the next...

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I've found that I write thoughts better than dialogue. You really like it? The black haired girl...well, you'll find out. Eventually.

Reviewer: midnight_me
Date: 01/23/06 12:27
Chapter: Rejected

Great start! I liked how Lily knew she had secret feelings for James. Nice twist!

Author's Response: THANK YOU! I wanted to do something different, and I'm trying. Thanks for liking it, and leaving a review!

Reviewer: EisleyLove
Date: 01/22/06 13:45
Chapter: Rejected

This is a really great story! I'm really enjoying your approach, it's original and interesting! Keep it up, this is awesome! 10!

Author's Response: Thanks! I read your story and it's great, too! I'll update as soon as I'm finished with chapter 3. :)

Reviewer: harry_potter_star
Date: 01/12/06 5:59
Chapter: Worried

hey! good chapter, I'd watch out for the whole I need so and so reviews, because if a mod finds that you will get a warning, then the chapter will be deleted or if you put it in the queue like that, not accepted, it happened to me as well :( it was good writing, though the books say that Voldemort had risen to power alot earlier than that, i would definately give you the page, but the books are at my mums house, so i cant im sorry!! over all, very good! update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up! I already edited that part. I know that Voldemort rose to power a lot earlier, but I needed it later for my plot. I'm glad you liked this chapter, and thanks for your review!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/11/06 17:00
Chapter: Worried

I raelly liked this chapter! I know that you want to wait for 5 reviews, but why make us wait?! It's cruel when you have such a good story! Anyways, I really liked how Lily tried to make things better with James, somewhat. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Well, I was frustrated because no one would review, so I put that there. I'm already almost done with the chapter, so I'll post it as soon as I have 5 reviews! Thank you so much for reviewing and for thinking that my fic is actually good!

Reviewer: Sirius Krummy Fan
Date: 01/08/06 14:37
Chapter: Worried

First one!!! Loving it, Amazing chapter. Poor James for getting yelled to like that. Poor Lily for hurting inside. Please update soon! 10!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! Even though James got yelled at, at least he got an apology later! I think that made getting yelled at worthwhile!

Reviewer: GinnyRox
Date: 01/02/06 22:07
Chapter: Rejected

Fantastic beginnig!! Update when you can!!! 10/10!

Author's Response: The second chapter is in queue as we speak (or rather, write.) Thank you!

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