Reviews For Touch of the Moon
Reviewer: pinkmoonflower
Date: 01/15/12 2:26
Chapter: Touch of the Moon


Author's Response: I'm going to have to work in a pink moonflower into one of my stories. Thank you!

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 04/02/10 10:48
Chapter: Touch of the Moon

Ew. I hate Rosier.

Aww, poor Remus. Dorcas is such a slimy toad, I want to throttle her! Remus deserves better than her...thank you--and thank Ms Rowling if you see her--for giving him much, much better! Despite the relationship JKR balanced all credit for a fabulous fic goes out to you, m'dear! I absolutely loved it! Especially the end. Tonks's reaction was priceless! I loved how she slapped him...and how he liked it ;)

Author's Response: Tonks is feisty, that's certain, and brings out the animal in Remus in a good way. ;)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/05/09 15:14
Chapter: Touch of the Moon

This was another take on one of my favorite chapters. I remember, once again, Evan's pathetic attempt to get back at Tonks by exposing Remus as a werewolf. Great one-shot. Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you! Evan is very much dog in the manger...which isn't a nice thing to say about dogs. :D

Reviewer: Soulful
Date: 08/16/07 19:25
Chapter: Touch of the Moon

Lovely. =D

"Why don’t you add ‘dangerous’ to the list and go play the violin?"

That part cracked me up, I love it! Sometimes sarcasm just makes things better.

Author's Response: 'Black' humor, pardon the pun, :D, keeps people (especially fictional ones, heh) from sinking too deep into self pity!

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 05/25/07 14:53
Chapter: Touch of the Moon

aww... how sweet...

Author's Response: To go Tonks, Ta, Thanks! ^_^

Reviewer: Augusta Wilfry
Date: 08/22/06 18:05
Chapter: Touch of the Moon

i like remus's POVs once in a short while. it adds depth to your already wonderful story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think I've averaged two Remus povs a fic- hopefully just enough to make you look forward to more! ^_^

Reviewer: Tabletop_Joe
Date: 07/07/06 14:44
Chapter: Touch of the Moon

Just one question: when is our favorite Classics scholar going to get around to Apicius and Columella? The man should cook a little something unusual for Tonks, don't you think?

Author's Response: Remus isn't very handy in the kitchen, but I think Tonks would like one of Columella's salads. Apicus' Ostrich Ragoût, though, is another story. :D

Reviewer: Aethonan13
Date: 06/16/06 3:37
Chapter: Touch of the Moon

A lovely missing moment.

Author's Response: Even though the series is from Tonks' pov, I do love writing Remus, so thank you very much!

Reviewer: 2727cat
Date: 06/15/06 8:41
Chapter: Touch of the Moon


Author's Response: Gracias! ^_^

Reviewer: rivers of gold
Date: 03/12/06 20:27
Chapter: Touch of the Moon

Ah. Another lovely POV, and wonderfully written, like all the others...Great job. :D

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for reading, and especially for being such an encouraging reviewer! ^_^

Reviewer: Lady Wolfine
Date: 02/07/06 22:43
Chapter: Touch of the Moon

ARGHHHHH!!!!! I DIDN'T REVEIW THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!! I'm a terrible person... I thought that I had, but I hadn't.... Oi yoi yoi yoi yoi.... Anyway... They call Latin a dead language but it's not.... oh, by the gods it's not. Hmmm, could it be the language of the gods? I love Remus sooo much! He thinks that Tonks will ditch him, but how wrong he is. He comforts her, really, in your most recent... and now I feel like even more of a loser, because...*blushes a very deep, embaressed crimson color, remnicent of the setting sun* I forgot the title. Arghhh, I really am a terrible person... It's on my favorites list, I know that. Meanwhile, gotta go. Wonderful installment, I love how you seem to 'track' Remus in this one, like you 'track' Tonks in the others. Great!

Author's Response: Terrible persons don't review and don't care, lol. You're a wonderful person, who corrected an understandable oversight. ^_^ I'm so glad you like the way I "track" Remus in one shots. If you forget the sequel title, just think "Moonlight", lol. Thanks for the review. When I watch the sun set, it will be reminsicent of Lady Wolfine's blush. :D

Reviewer: Antipodean Opaleye
Date: 12/13/05 21:18
Chapter: Touch of the Moon

Great! Just like the other one. I notice you didn't write in first person, which is a random observation, but I liked it. It would have been hard to write that in first person I think. *Shrugs* Anyway, you did that well, but maybe Remus was a tiny bit too smug-ish? I like his reaction to Evan, hehe. Hey 'Evan' sounds annoyingly like 'Evans'. Any reason for that? Oh well.

Author's Response: Evan Rosier was one of the names of Death Eaters rattled off in the books, so I thought it would be fun to make his son come to life. I pictured Remus as doing some positive self affirmation after looking in the mirror, seeing a bloke over a dozen years of hard life older than Tonks, and needing to reassure himself that while not perfect, he's perfect for her. 'Blue Moon' is my first multi chap first person pov fic. I don't think it suits most types of stories, but romantic suspense is one of the genres it fits well. Hope that answers everything. :D

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 12/13/05 20:53
Chapter: Touch of the Moon

My Remus! LATIN LATIN LATIN YAY! I hate not getting to take Latin again this year, and I've forgotten half of what I knew too. 'S sad. Would Evan really have known Latin? I mean, most Hogwarts students don't learn it, and I don't think a Slytherin would study anything they didn't think was going to be useful for gaining power or whatever. Scholarship is the Ravenclaw thing. Evan doesn't seem like the type either. Of course he's your character so he can't really be out of character.... ;) Remus rates himself very highly doesn't he, thinking his kisses are better than chocolate. CHOCOLATE! Goodness. I liked it. I'm sure you never would have guessed that so I thought I'd tell you. I need a smiley that rolls it's eyes. One never knows if people will catch sarcasm over the internet. I can picture James and Sirius arguing all the time over absurd things. My brother likes to argue for the sake of arguing too. He'll argue the side he disagrees with just for the fun of it, and to annoy people. I'm very fond of him. :) Excellant work, again.

Author's Response: I'm getting the feeling that you like Latin, lol. Since spells are in Latin, I can see upper class wizards having their children tutored, so they'll excel when at Hogwarts. I think Evan took great pains to memorize the bit of Catallus, which is why he had trouble working out Remus' reply. (and truly educated people will catch you out, which is why I only sprinkle bits through, lol) Actually, I bet Tonks told him his kisses were better than chocolate, which I believe she meant wholeheartedly. (After all, she'd had a year with chocolate and without kisses, heh) Yay for sarcasm over the internet and brothers who argue for the fun of it. Thanks for the fab review! (why can't writers give reviews ten stars? ^_^)

Reviewer: petiteloupegarou
Date: 12/13/05 13:56
Chapter: Touch of the Moon

Nice. Just like your other story. It's nice to get something of Remus' point of view. Are you going to continue in both stories?

Author's Response: Thanks! Since 'Once in a Blue Moon' is strictly Tonks' pov, I had to give Remus a separate one shot. I also plan on posting a Sirius ficlet to go along with chapter 16 of Blue Moon and another one for Remus one is in the works. Thanks for asking the question...I'd forgot to put 'complete'! D'oh! (changed now, thanks to you. ^_^)

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