Reviewer: Sana
Date: 06/05/07 2:42
Chapter: {YEAR ONE} Gryffindor-Slytherin clash

WHERE ARE YOU!!?? Do you not realize that people are DYING without any updates??!! :p

Reviewer: ginny_w_rox
Date: 05/10/07 14:12
Chapter: Of Broom Cupboards, Fights and Apple Pies

this is such a gd story... i luv it! o and gd luck with ur studies,,, the quicker and harder u study the faster u caan update!!!

Reviewer: ginny_w_rox
Date: 05/09/07 14:49
Chapter: Of condors, wandering at night and moon-gazing

this is such a cool chapter
luv it!!!

Reviewer: The Mighty KFC
Date: 05/07/07 21:41
Chapter: {YEAR ONE} Gryffindor-Slytherin clash

i love this beginning!

Reviewer: WrackspurtGirl
Date: 05/04/07 11:36
Chapter: Of Broom Cupboards, Fights and Apple Pies

My friend recommended your story and im so glad that ive read it! Its just fantastic! Im not sure what to say but i think your story is amazing!!!!

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 04/28/07 19:13
Chapter: Of Broom Cupboards, Fights and Apple Pies

YAHHHHHHHH!!!
Man, this is great.
I want to keep reading SO badly, but tragically I have to leave. You have a rabid fan in me!

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 04/26/07 22:21
Chapter: Of monsters, vicious trees, socks and metaphors

WAUGH!!! Oh man. They just keep getting better and better! Where do you GET this talent, and how can I get some? I am truly and devotedly forever your fan!

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 04/26/07 22:00
Chapter: Of condors, wandering at night and moon-gazing

WOW this was a good one. Ohhhh... you have yourself an addict in me. Absolutely spectacular chapter!

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 04/20/07 22:18
Chapter: Of the different uses of parchment planes and Levitation Spells

I'm not sure why, but James crossing his legs in midair was the perfect touch. Really, truly perfect. I don't know why that part struck me so, but it just seemed so... James-like. Good job!

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 04/20/07 22:18
Chapter: Of the different uses of parchment planes and Levitation Spells

I'm not sure why, but James crossing his legs in midair was the perfect touch. Really, truly perfect. I don't know why that part struck me so, but it just seemed so... James-like. Good job!

Reviewer: Evik
Date: 04/20/07 11:15
Chapter: Of Broom Cupboards, Fights and Apple Pies

Hi, I'm so sorry for not reviewing earlier. I've been kind of busy in my real life. I think you know that situation.;) Anyway, I really liked this chapter. Sirius was a bit annoying, but he has a reason for it. :D I hope the Slytherins won't hurt him. :( Hehe, I really liked James as the mediator between Sirius and Remus. That was really amusing. I can't wait to read the next chappie.

xxx Evik

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 04/19/07 22:39
Chapter: Of the diplomatic virtues of a flying broomstick

Oooh I like. The character developement is really addicting. I'd like to see a little more of their funny sides, though... although I guess since they're just meeting each other they wouldn't be joking around as much. I really like this, great job!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 04/16/07 17:27
Chapter: Of Broom Cupboards, Fights and Apple Pies

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait!!

Reviewer: Furry Little Problem
Date: 04/16/07 12:45
Chapter: {YEAR ONE} Gryffindor-Slytherin clash

Very VERY good! I really enjoyed this, and I love the way you wrote all of the marauders meeting eachother - with James and Sirius at the party, and then them meeting Peter and Remus on the train. That was very good. Young-Lucius was very well written - very good! I really enjoy the way you have written James getting his Invisibility Cloak - that was very well plotted, and I loved Sirius in that chapter! His sulkiness at not being told, and then him being really pleased at being the one James chose to tell - perfectly Sirius.
My favorite part was probably James and Sirius realising it was full moon - and therefore realising Remus was a werewolf. I really loved that - it was written very well! I loved this line "Outside, the moon was serenely bathing the castle in its pure and ghostly light." - beautifuly sinister.
And James following Remus to the Willow - wow. That part was brilliant. James's emotions, and Remus's reactions were spot on - it was wonderful to read something so good! I loved James's line " “Erm… You’re not going to — to do something awkward like — like burst into tears, are you?” he asked nervously. “‘Cause I’m really not good at handling those sort of situations.” " - that was great! Very James.
There's more chapters? YAY!!! Can't wait for the update. I'll be on my toes till it comes.... :)
Well done, it's a great fic! You've got the marauder's perfectly characterised and I love your plot.
good luck with the next chapters, and...
Keep writing!!! :)
Furry Little Problem (Tonks MNBB)

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 03/23/07 4:22
Chapter: Of Broom Cupboards, Fights and Apple Pies

Wow. This chapters is great! & Has a lot of Sirius-ness in it! I loved it.

You know, updating a story each month isn't that bad for your readers. There are loads of authors who update only once a month & their stories aren't very impressive. Yours thoguh have every right to take a full month for a chapter to be written.

Keep on!

Reviewer: Inbl
Date: 03/04/07 22:12
Chapter: Of Broom Cupboards, Fights and Apple Pies

If u need to take time to make it better we'll wait

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: Inbl
Date: 03/04/07 13:13
Chapter: {YEAR TWO} Of fantastic stories, scales and reunion

Love the story so far its awesome, i havent read this chapter yet im about to right now, but i really have to point out something thats bothering me pyjamas is supposed to be spelled pajamas.

Author's Response: I'm writing the story in British English, and in British English it's pyjamas, not pajamas.

Reviewer: Pick Up A Potter
Date: 03/04/07 9:28
Chapter: Of Broom Cupboards, Fights and Apple Pies

please release a new story pleaseeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Lack of time right now, but I have already 5 stories, plus ideas for a 6th and a 7th... surely you can be patient with me?

Reviewer: Sunflower at Dusk
Date: 03/03/07 22:41
Chapter: Of Broom Cupboards, Fights and Apple Pies

Sorry my last review should have write not right. I really like your style of writing.

Author's Response: Thank you, and don't worry about typos. I make those often enough myself.

Reviewer: LifeAtRandom
Date: 03/02/07 21:05
Chapter: {YEAR ONE} Gryffindor-Slytherin clash

I am extremely impressed by this story, by far it's the best Marauder Era fic I've so far (and I've been reading the for years). Your writing is original and your portrayal of the Marauders is exactly how I saw them. Great work.

But, inevitably, with good things there comes bad things. I so wish you didn't have med school, so you could update sooner! It's all too good.

I wanna ask how did you do it? How did you come up with the creation and imagination that made this fic so great and original? Whatever method it is, it's brilliant.

Anyway, I'm babbling. Can't wait for chapter 13.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm very happy you like the story. As for my update rate, it's getting much more of a problem right now. I'm sorry, but you'll probably have to wait till June. April if I'm lucky.

I don't have any methods :). I am roughly following a plan, but I often come up with different ideas in the middle... and I pay much attention to developping my characters :). That's all, really. Oh, and I reread my chapters until I get sick of them. That's for the style, spelling and grammar.

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