Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 12/29/07 6:50
Chapter: Where we begin to wonder about Remus' problem

I like you yake the chapters/events slow; you don't rush everything.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 12/29/07 6:32
Chapter: Where another kind is discovered: not-so-pure-blood greasy monkeys

I love the detail.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 12/29/07 6:15
Chapter: Of the diplomatic virtues of a flying broomstick

I like it.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 12/29/07 6:00
Chapter: {YEAR ONE} Gryffindor-Slytherin clash

This was TERRIFICALLY written. Very sophisticated.

Reviewer: Lyra the Lovely
Date: 12/04/07 20:20
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

Hey, are you ever going to finish this?! I'm dying to hear the rest. I know, read JKR's book, but i want your humor and detail! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 11/08/07 15:38
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

Mugglenet decided not to let me know you'd updated. Silly site. I loved the quidditch try-out! That was so much fun. I was really surprised Gudgeon made it onto the team though. It seems like Collins would have wanted not just good players but players that can work well together also. However, it's probably not as good of a plot device that way. :)

Reviewer: sandybeaple
Date: 10/10/07 22:50
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

Whoa! He finally made it to the team! I'm so proud of him. Just wish Sirius would toughen up soon!

Reviewer: CheeseKing
Date: 10/10/07 9:56
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 10/02/07 7:31
Chapter: {YEAR ONE} Gryffindor-Slytherin clash

Hello! I loved the way you portrayed Sirius Black. He seems to resent his family a lot, and this is definitely is in character. I always imagined Sirius as being a little rebel, and you managed that perfectly! And his inner train of thought is very believable, really like that of a eleven-year-old boy who wants to be free of his parents' clutches. :D Good job on characterisation!


Reviewer: JamesNLilyLover
Date: 09/09/07 1:45
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

Update quickly! This is an amazing story.

Reviewer: JamesNLilyLover
Date: 09/09/07 0:38
Chapter: Of monsters, vicious trees, socks and metaphors

This story is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! My gosh, you are a WONDERFUL writer. Keep writing, and update quickly!

Reviewer: Lyra the Lovely
Date: 09/03/07 13:56
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

please write more!

Reviewer: Lyra the Lovely
Date: 09/02/07 15:38
Chapter: Of condors, wandering at night and moon-gazing

i feel so bad for Remus. I just want to give him a hug! great job with your writing, being able to make people feel such strong emtions shows just how good a writer you are. keep it up.

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 08/30/07 17:30
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

Great chapter! I'm sorry I didn't review sooner, but I was on vacation out of town, & the net was so slow, it was infuriating to open a webpage. So I only managed to get as far as opening the link in my email to the story (I can't ignore fanfiction alerts. =D), & I had to switch off the net while reading. And, well, I didn't happen to stop by after that.

Anyway, the chapter was great. I can't wait for mroe updates!

Reviewer: untitlednine
Date: 08/25/07 7:27
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

awww, theres no more parts up:( how long until the next one?

its great so far.

Reviewer: untitlednine
Date: 08/25/07 6:22
Chapter: Of monsters, vicious trees, socks and metaphors

Peter raised his eyebrows. “Y’know, if you’re that hungry, you can ask me for food anytime you want. I always have sweets and things in my trunk.”

that made me laugh.

well done for the first part of the story. how far are you planning on continuing it?

Reviewer: untitlednine
Date: 08/24/07 22:59
Chapter: Of the different uses of parchment planes and Levitation Spells

i'm just hoping lily wasn't wearing a skirt.

Reviewer: WrackspurtGirl
Date: 08/23/07 6:52
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

Great chapter! I love the way that you have written the Quidditch tryout - that was great characterisation (sp?).
I thought it was fantastic how you've ogt James practicing charms at home late at night so that he can have more time to try and work out a solution for Remus' furry little problem!
Thats really sweet!

Reviewer: luna_rox_my_sox
Date: 08/21/07 0:06
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

update please. i love it btw... incredible... u'd think u where jo :)

Reviewer: Lyra the Lovely
Date: 08/20/07 9:37
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

absolutely awesome writing. I just found your story yesterday. I stayed up most of the night reading it. Excelent. update soon.

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