Reviewer: marauderlove3
Date: 10/04/09 21:06
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

Umm wow you really need to update this like now thanks.

Reviewer: dragoneyes1029
Date: 05/06/09 21:09
Chapter: Of the diplomatic virtues of a flying broomstick

nice! I like it already.

Reviewer: me_thinks
Date: 02/25/09 17:49
Chapter: Of monsters, vicious trees, socks and metaphors

You've done a really amazing job lending these characters a complexity that was, to be honest, lacking in Rowling's novels. This is by far the best Marauders' Era fic I've read. I particularly love your characterization of Peter, for whom I had little to no sympathy--and even a distinct abhorrence--in Rowling's novels. Each of the characters you've chosen to write reveals the true complexity of human nature, which is not an easy feat for an author!

Reviewer: me_thinks
Date: 02/25/09 17:43
Chapter: {YEAR ONE} Gryffindor-Slytherin clash

FANTASTIC!
I was in love by the end of the first section!
The postman's encounter with number 12 grimmauld place is very Rowling-esque, but with you own distinct flair.

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 09/06/08 14:21
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

Great story. You portray it all so well! And it's also pretty hilarious. I'd love to spend the next couple of hours writing everything I loved about it, but instead I think I'll waste my breath begging you to update. I mean, come on, it's been over a year, according to the site. Because of this, I know it is unlikely that I can get you to write anymore, but I have to try. I beg of you to get off hiatus and keep writing! I mean, this story one a QSQ, doesn't that give you, like, and obligation to your fans to finish the story?

...or something?

Reviewer: ginny_rulz
Date: 04/16/08 13:27
Chapter: {YEAR ONE} Gryffindor-Slytherin clash

very well written. the Blacks are so wonderfully potrayed. great job :)

Reviewer: taytay
Date: 04/02/08 14:09
Chapter: Where another kind is discovered: not-so-pure-blood greasy monkeys

wow i really liked your story it was wonderfull

Reviewer: bertiebott12
Date: 04/01/08 18:46
Chapter: Where another kind is discovered: not-so-pure-blood greasy monkeys

Hello!

I liked this chapter, probably the best out of the three. I loved the way that Remus described Hagrid, and was reluctant to tell strangers about "his time of the month". He seemed to be the character that you can write the best, so far, mixing in a fair amount of shyness and intelligence, but also having a fun side to his character.

One thing, I loved how Bellatrix was characterized in the middle of the piece, but felt that she was too easygoing/nice in the beginning, when she dropped off Sirius by Severus Snape. COuld you have maybe added in some looks of disgust, hateful words, or something in her actions to show the type of person that she is?

I liked the bit about the trunk. and the reaction of the other Hogwarts students. It was wonderful how you had everyone blaming each other, and working it into the right section in the fic, so it didn't seem out of place. What I liked most about this chapter, was that it had a mix of humour, dark themes, and even potential romances into later parts of the story.

Great job!

/Claire

Reviewer: bertiebott12
Date: 04/01/08 18:19
Chapter: Of the diplomatic virtues of a flying broomstick

Hello again!

I liked this chapter slightly less than the last one, but it was good all the same. Imagining Sirius and James, their first game of Quiditch together was wonderful. I loved your description of the backyard, and the hoops at the end of the fifty foot area. You played the surprise of each boy, James and Sirius, perfectly when they found out how different they were from the regular pureblood mindset.

I was a bit surprise that each boy accepted each other so quickly. In the books it shows us that they seemed to be rather stubborn in their own beliefs, and was surprised that they didn't keep the preformed opinions of each other that they had at the beginning ot the story. In a way, I like what you did, but would have liked to see a hint of icyness between the two.

I also would have liked another cliffhanger at the end of the chapter; the other one in the first chapter was quite nice, and it really kept me reading. A question that I had while reading was, wasn't the knife that opened any lock Sirius's that he handed down to Harry? I would have been surprised if James had given Sirius his special knife, or, if he did, Sirius would have probably told Harry that.

I noticed some conflicting descriptions, for example, Regulus. Sirius said that he would tell his mother anything, and wouldn't dare speak or even think a word out of line. But, when you talked about the ghoul in the attic, why hadn't Regulus told his mother about the ghoul? I think that it would have made more sense if it had somemore description.

Overall, good chapter!

/Claire

Reviewer: eaglette with wheels
Date: 02/22/08 19:03
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

Yay! Update soon.. when is Sirius going to learn? tsk tsk tsk... he was really pissing me off in these last few chapters.

Reviewer: eaglette with wheels
Date: 02/22/08 19:03
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

Yay! Update soon.. when is Sirius going to learn? tsk tsk tsk... he was really pissing me off in these last few chapters.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 01/14/08 22:45
Chapter: Of Disturbed Stomachs, Green Hair and Ballet

That was LONG but well written.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 01/14/08 21:59
Chapter: Of Broom Cupboards, Fights and Apple Pies

You have a very large vocabulary.

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 01/11/08 7:08
Chapter: Of Nosebleeds, Mischievous Mirrors and Disastrous Trips

Having one less person makes the group seem very empty.
I liked the whole Lily Evans with mudgreen hair scenario.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 01/05/08 5:03
Chapter: Of muffins, crazy ideas and butterflies

I like shortish chapters. I find them easier to read for some reason.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 12/30/07 1:01
Chapter: {YEAR TWO} Of fantastic stories, scales and reunion

A VERY long chapter. I have to set aside a large amount of time just so i can read ONE chapter! :P

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 12/30/07 0:31
Chapter: Of monsters, vicious trees, socks and metaphors

I get it now...Symphony for Quartet...tune will be played by four musicians...VERY clever.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 12/30/07 0:06
Chapter: Of condors, wandering at night and moon-gazing

Love it.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 12/29/07 23:43
Chapter: Of snowball fights, death by soap bubbles and family obligations

I am REALLY starting to like this story. It could possibly be one of my favourites.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 12/29/07 7:11
Chapter: Of the different uses of parchment planes and Levitation Spells

What does "Bonne lecture!" mean?

I wish i had pranksters like the marauders in my school.

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