Reviews For The Last Marauder
Reviewer: RiddleHatred
Date: 10/07/06 13:16
Chapter: I remember...

Sirius/Lupin ficpoem?!

Reviewer: marvolo
Date: 01/26/06 9:28
Chapter: I remember...

GREAT POEM! It is really good and I just LOVED the theme. Take a well deserved 10! P.S- BY THE WAY, I WRITE POEMS TOO, YOU CAN READ ONE, TITLED "OUT OF THIN AIR", WHICH IS THE THIRD ONE FROM TOP. AND IF YOU HAPPEN TO READ IT, DO REVIEW!

Reviewer: angelofplottwists
Date: 12/15/05 19:47
Chapter: I remember...

Brilliant! As far as I can tell, the emotion is right...I liked how he's afraid of forgetting everything, and then all the memories, and...yeah, well, I pretty much liked all of it. It's nice that you write in a free verse-esque style, because the ones written too fixedly often come out sounding forced. Another good element was how you let the reader know who it was about with mentioning names.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I wasn't sure if I should mention the names in the summary, but I'm glad you thought it was a good idea. Thanks for your review, the next installment will be up after Christmas probably.

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