OMG that is so good. I love that song and this story fits it perfectly.
Wow... She really does need him.... Hey! It's very good!
great one-shot. the song rly did correspond with the story. good job on it
Great job! This seems really believable. Usually, Hermione is seen as somebody whose aspirations are very important to her, but this is very realistic. She never gets too serious with anyone in the books, so it seems like she would react like this in this type of situation. Again, great work!
it is ok but not the best
Very good story! I enjoyed the parallels between the song and your fic. You conveyed Hermione's thoughts very well; I liked the way you expressed her confused emotions. The only criticism I have that it is a litte bit repetitive. You have some excellent points, but sometimes you reinforce them too many times. However, having said that, I did really enjoy your fic. Well done!
OMG!! I CANT BELIEVE THIS!!! LOL... I WAS JUST WORKING ON THE SAME STORY!! ONLY I WAS GOING TO MAKE IT A FULL-LENGTH FIC!! I CANT BELIEVE IT!! I WILL STILL WRITE MY STORY, SO IM SRY!! BUT THIS IS REALLY COOL... I JUST FINISHED CHAPTER ONE OF THIS FIC. LOL!!!guess u made it b4 me... hmph... lol.. o well i still got others up my sleeve!! good story!