"I am not some kind of accessory that can be owned!"
i love this line. its so hermione...
you've captured the characters perfectly
no offence but dont use caps they hurt my eyes especialy at quarter to one in the morning nice though
Hey There!
This is a great fanfiction! Keep on writing!!
WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!
this is quite an excellent story. you captured the emotions i saw for ron.
this is quite an excellent story. you captured the emotions i saw for ron.
Great Story! I really loved it. Ron seemed to have matured a great deal. I like him better that way i think.
This was FANTASTIC! You had a lot of interesting ideas about Horcruxes in the beginning, which I liked. And then you really got into the details of their relationship. I'm glad you didn't just put them together. I'm personally of the opinion that it's going to take them a great deal of work, and you're showing that. I like your character study of Ron, a lot. He's sometimes unsure of himself, and sometimes jealous, but sometimes, he's amazing. You hit all those angles and more. Hermione's injury was a nice twist, and it's driving them apart despite everything was good too. I can't wait to see what you do with Hermione's point of view, and I really can't wait for them to get together! Great job!
Author's Response: Wow. *is stunned* Thank you for such a lovely review. Especially coming from you, it means a great deal. I tried hard to cover all the aspects of their personalities and their relationship, and I'm very glad you picked up on that!
As for the update *shifty eyes*. I don't know when I'm going to get to it...but I'll try and make it as soon as I can.
Thanks again! - Anu
and why don't you have more stunning, complimentary reviews? Because this story definitely deserves them! A refreshing break from the usual (yet enjoyable) fluff! Please update ASAP! 10/10 and going on my favorites!
Author's Response: You have no idea how flattering your review is. Thank you, it really made me smile. :)
Hi! This is really good..interesting set-up. I am surprised to be your first review, but please keep on writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliments! I'm actually working on revising this chapter for like the 100 billionth time and it will have a few more flashbacks, so check back soon!
