Reviews For The Wings of Night
Reviewer: HP_GWRW_HG
Date: 04/01/07 1:21
Chapter: The Wings of Night

Great story.... I really like h/g so I enjoyed it but I found it very sad at the end.

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 09/08/06 16:09
Chapter: The Wings of Night

huh? I'm slightly confused about the last line... anyway, really well written i like the bit about the snowflake and the leaf..

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 09/08/06 16:02
Chapter: The Wings of Night

huh? I'm slightly confused about the last line... anyway, really well written i like the bit about the snowflake and the leaf..

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 09/08/06 16:01
Chapter: The Wings of Night

huh? I'm slightly confused about the last line... anyway, really well written i like the bit about the snowflake and the leaf..

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 09/05/06 19:32
Chapter: The Wings of Night

I loved this story, and (sorry) haven't reviewed before now, but keep checking to see if you have written any more. There was a sense of desolation to this short story that I felt was almost magically evoked by the writing, and a use of description that I particularly enjoyed. I would love to read some more of your works.

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 09/05/06 19:31
Chapter: The Wings of Night

I loved this story, and (sorry) haven't reviewed before now, but keep checking to see if you have written any more. There was a sense of desolation to this short story that I felt was almost magically evoked by the writing, and a use of description that I particularly enjoyed. I would love to read some more of your works.

Reviewer: Emmiebyrd
Date: 02/14/06 17:59
Chapter: The Wings of Night

This was very good. Ginny and Draco though? Yuck.. Apparently she thought so too...

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 01/24/06 9:36
Chapter: The Wings of Night

I could just see the story in my head when I was reading this. You have an amazing writing style, to let you know. I don't really ship G/D and even though in your story Ginny said Draco had changed he didn't seem like he did that much. He was mad at Harry even though Harry did so much. The leaf was so tiny but meaningful at the same time. I understood the gift and felt like crying in the end. I loved this story, I think you should write a lot more, I'd read it all.

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 12/21/05 22:05
Chapter: The Wings of Night

see, this was difficult for me because well, I am solely and utterly devoted to D/G. I thought your writing was good, but I just couldn't love the story you know because it was anti-DG. However some points: First, Draco would probably have a rude comment about Harry. Second, I doubt Harry could be so noble as to utterly forgive the man who has the girl he loves. I mean, yes he's Harry Potter, but he isn't persfect. In general I think I would have liked to see more emotions portrayed. Was Ginny's heart pounding when Draco walked in. HOw did Harry feel when he saw all those presents? You know, stuff like that. Great descriptions, pretty good story. Just more emotion would have been nice...and no anti-DG-ness. But that's totally your perogative as the author. *stifles a sob* Kumy

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 12/16/05 19:19
Chapter: The Wings of Night

That was great! I loved it! I really have to give you a lot of credit; I rearely tolerate H/G. I just rarely see anybody pull it off they way I like. But that was awesome!

Reviewer: ermine the one
Date: 12/15/05 14:03
Chapter: The Wings of Night

Wow, very descriptive, i can just imagine a crackling fire casting shadows over Ginny's face as she says: yes, I can see that. This is a really good fic, and I wish you the best of luck.

~Ermine the One

Reviewer: ginnyweasly186
Date: 12/15/05 3:07
Chapter: The Wings of Night

Your story was very moving. Draco has changed but he still doesn't know the importance of such a small but meaningful gift. A tear nearly leaked out my eye. ~**10/10**~

Reviewer: Cuse
Date: 12/12/05 18:03
Chapter: The Wings of Night

Great story. I can actually invision the setting of the story. Sad ending though, but great story. 10/10

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