Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 08/17/06 23:34
Chapter: The Potion and a Slip

I did lie to you.

She knew that would make him stop. As he turned around, she saw the injured look in his eyes and it pushed her to tears."

>>> Ok, i was crying after this... Amazing ! You sure have a way with words. Fantastic!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm glad it impacted a reader, as it is one of my favourite lines too! =) Thanks so much! =) --RP

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 08/17/06 23:07
Chapter: A Memory and Secrets Told

wheres this going to go.......

Author's Response: Read on to find out, my friend. =) Thanks for reviewing! =) --RP

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 08/17/06 22:56
Chapter: A Test Run and a Talk

oh boy...pregnant Ginny. I know this is going to only get worse before it gets better...

Author's Response: A smart reader, you are. =)

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 08/17/06 22:42
Chapter: Hermione's Secret

ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THey are in deep s**t !!!!! Oh i cant imagine the Row that this is going to create! Well done!!!

Author's Response: LOL, thanks so much! Keep on reading and reviewing! lol =) --RP

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 08/17/06 22:21
Chapter: A Rather Loud Confession

oh crap! Well at least Hermione know now right...! (good first chapter)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! =) --RP

Author's Response: Thanks so much! =) --RP

Reviewer: CinderElly
Date: 08/17/06 10:14
Chapter: The Beginning

Aww i love this pleeeeeeease update soon.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! But this is the end of my fiction. Thank you for the read & review!! =) --RP

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! But this is the end of my fiction. Thank you for the read & review!! =) --RP

Reviewer: K_A_Newton
Date: 08/16/06 22:05
Chapter: The Beginning

ONE WORD: EXCELLENT

Author's Response: ONE WORD: Thanks! lol. But thakns for the read and reviews! -RP =)

Reviewer: K_A_Newton
Date: 08/16/06 21:06
Chapter: A Rather Loud Confession

woah!! exellent!! i can t wait to finish the story

Author's Response: Oh, please do! lol. Thanks for the review!! =) --RP

Reviewer: SiriusPotterFan1
Date: 08/16/06 20:24
Chapter: The Beginning

Wowo. Goodness, I didn't...wow.

Author's Response: Um, thanks I hope. BY that, I mean that I do hope that was a good "wow." lol. Thanks for the review!! =) --RP

Reviewer: BlondieFangurl
Date: 08/15/06 19:16
Chapter: The Potion and a Slip

Ginny isn't pregnant? Aww. I think Ron overreated

Author's Response: Well I might overreact in that situation too... Thank you for reviewing!! =) -RP

Reviewer: Xalbrend
Date: 08/15/06 14:45
Chapter: The Beginning

Nice ending.

Author's Response: Thank you!! =) --RP

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 08/15/06 10:57
Chapter: The Beginning

So very sad that Ginny lost the baby, but I understand why you did that. I loved this little story! You did a nice job with such a sensitive topic. Harry was wonderful to Ginny and even though he wasn't ready to be a father, he was still very affected by the loss. Great story! I do hope you continue to write. Maybe a sequel or a new story...

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! And thanks for all your nice reviews throughout the story! You're postive comments make me smile! I may write a sequel, but I'm not sure yet... Thanks so much! =) --RP

Reviewer: sair_bears
Date: 08/15/06 6:08
Chapter: The Beginning

WTF you cant end the story there thats crap!

Author's Response: You're reviews are very confusing, no offence meant. --RP

Reviewer: sair_bears
Date: 08/15/06 6:06
Chapter: The Potion and a Slip

Your a great writter, i cant wait for your next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks agian, lol!

Reviewer: sair_bears
Date: 08/15/06 6:03
Chapter: The Potion and a Slip

Your a great writter, i cant wait for your next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you!! =) --RP

Reviewer: sair_bears
Date: 08/15/06 5:59
Chapter: The Potion and a Slip

WTF- there was all this good stuff and now its gone to shit

Author's Response: I'm terribly sorry you feel that way. But I do wish you'd be a bit more spescific, so I could improve. --RP

Reviewer: sair_bears
Date: 08/15/06 2:55
Chapter: Hermione's Secret

NO THATS CRAP! it cant happen like that , Ernie can piss off

Author's Response: I really hope that you're just speaking of the characters' actions, not my writing. --RP

Reviewer: sair_bears
Date: 08/15/06 2:48
Chapter: A Rather Loud Confession

THATS A FREAKIN GREAT ENDING TO THE FIRST CHAPTER!!! Sorry it was though :P

Author's Response: Thanks! =) --RP

Reviewer: HP_romance_13
Date: 08/14/06 13:30
Chapter: The Potion and a Slip

I have enjoyed reading this story. It is very well written, and interesting as well. I can't wait for the next chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far! The next and final chapter will be hopefully up soon! Thanks so much! =) --RP

Reviewer: x_GryffinGal_x
Date: 08/14/06 11:30
Chapter: The Potion and a Slip

::gawks:: That was great....keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! COme back for te final chapter, chapter 8! Thanks! =) --RP

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