Reviews For Heaven
Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 06/02/07 14:08
Chapter: Athena's Pernicious Plan

Wow I really like this story. It's so unique. I never thought that this would tie into Harry and Voldemort, but I guess I should have. I've added this story to my favs, so update quickly please!

Author's Response: This a repeat of the same review. Oh well. Glad to see you're eager.

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 06/02/07 14:08
Chapter: Athena's Pernicious Plan

Wow I really like this story. It's so unique. I never thought that this would tie into Harry and Voldemort, but I guess I should have. I've added this story to my favs, so update quickly please!

Author's Response: Yes, even when dead, Dumbledore has to face evil. I guess a lifelong habit never dies...even when you're dead. Strange. Well, thanks for reviewing. I'll do my best to update.

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 06/02/07 13:32
Chapter: An Anomalous Altercation

Wow, you have a wild imagination. Very interesting story. Really cute.

Author's Response: Cute? Never has any of my work been called cute. Don't worry, I'm not offended, I'm bewildered. I guess the lumpkins could be called cute...when they aren't trying to squash you, that is.

Reviewer: clabbert2101
Date: 06/02/07 8:58
Chapter: Athena's Pernicious Plan

It's a good chapter but you might want to go over it for some grammer issues.

Thank you for updating quickly.

Author's Response: Grammer has always been a killer...for me, at least. I'll proofread my other chapters, but don't be surprised if I miss things. I'm only human, after all!

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 06/01/07 19:47
Chapter: Athena's Pernicious Plan

Great story! Pleez update!

Author's Response: I have all the chapters planned out, and I'm updating as quickly as possible. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 06/01/07 16:28
Chapter: The Incredibly Boring Beginning

Wow, so far so good. Very intriguing start. I shall read more later.

Author's Response: Hope you enjoy the rest!

Reviewer: clabbert2101
Date: 05/19/07 20:25
Chapter: The Council of God

Yay! You updated!

Author's Response: Yes, I know's it been a long while. I've been distracted and stressed, but I have but one thing to say: I'm back! Back...until other things distract me. Quote: "I was on my way to conquer the world, when I got distracted by something shiny."

Author's Response: Looking back, I see very bad language. My first response says: I know's it been, but should be: I know it's been

Reviewer: Last HP Relative
Date: 02/17/07 22:21
Chapter: A Very Frosty Welcome

man that was nasty! 10/10 the Parade goes marching one by one hurrah hurrah... lalalalalalala!!!!

Author's Response: 10/10? My English teacher would laugh and then make me cry by saying this deserves a 4/10 (of course, I would take care of him with a blowtorch first). Nice song lyrics... the Parade goes marching seven by seven hurrah hurrah!

Reviewer: Last HP Relative
Date: 02/17/07 22:17
Chapter: Gruesome Gitters

whoo kick athenas arse dumbledore, olay olay olay olay olay olay... you know dumbledore and god teamed up will make for a deadly combination, i bet athena is behind the dork lard the little son of a - THIS REVIEW HAS BEEN INTTURUPTED BY THE ALL-POWERFUL ONES BECAUSE THAT WORD WAS TOO HARSH FOR CHILDRENS EARS THANK YOU.

Author's Response: Thank you "ALL-POWERFUL ONES" for taking care of our expletive problem. And thank you too, for reviewing!

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 05/19/06 23:12
Chapter: A Very Frosty Welcome

Update, finally!

I know exactly who Mortimer was. He was Ron's uncle Bilius, wasn't he?

I think I know what they encountered ... Tauris (sp)?

Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough...about what they encountered not who Mortimer is. I will reveal who he is in a later chapter.

Reviewer: clabbert2101
Date: 05/19/06 10:08
Chapter: A Very Frosty Welcome

cool.

Author's Response: Thank you. I feared that it would be disturbing.

Reviewer: wishiwereaweasley
Date: 03/08/06 16:02
Chapter: The Chase is On

Well, this is certainly one of the most original fics I've ever read. Did you create all these creature yourself? Sprinkles and gitters and all the rest? It's certainly very creative! And are the rest of the Greek gods going to make an appearance? I'm a little confused, because in mythology Athena and Minerva are the same person, and you have them as separate ones, but it's not a big problem. I loved Dumbledore's indignance at being laughed at! I suppose it's not something he's used to! Can't wait to see what happens now that he's at the palace!

Author's Response: I did make up all those creatures. My friends think I'm insane after they read it, but I'm glad to know it is merely creativity. About Minerva and Athena;you'll find that I've twisted the gods in mythology ...a lot

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 02/22/06 3:40
Chapter: The Chase is On

Wesley's feeling sorry because the ranting Goddess of War (Athena) is around.

Author's Response: Yes, I suppose...Then again anyone would feel sorry because Athena around. I've made her into a pretty nasty godess haven't I?

Reviewer: Pheonixfan
Date: 02/07/06 19:50
Chapter: Gruesome Gitters

Wow! This fic is awesome! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you. I've never thought of myself as such a good writer. I thought this fic was going to turn out to be pathetic... I'm glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 02/07/06 6:51
Chapter: An Anomalous Altercation

Awesome fanfic! I haven't seen this kind of HP story anywhere else ...

Author's Response: It's awesome, huh? I'll try to keep it that way...if I fail miserably do not think too badly of me.

Reviewer: Queen Akilah
Date: 01/18/06 8:26
Chapter: The Incredibly Boring Beginning

Ah, Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore. Who couldn't love him? (Besides Voldemort and his Death Eathers, of course). Any way, I agree with Koneko Sutano. I looked it up on Dictionary.com and it said that the definition of 'boring' was as follows 'uninteresting and tiresome; dull.' I think that this will be a great story, I've always wondered what heaven is like. I just have one question. Why aren't the clouds wet? Anyway, great story. Well done!!!

Author's Response: I thought I put Wesley saying something about not playing with oykel, not clouds, to Dumbledore. Clouds are wet. Oykel isn't. I didn't really clear that up in the story. Everyone loves looking up words in the dictionary. Well prepare to look up the words in Chapter 2's title (unless you already know them). If you've wondered what heaven is like, you ought to still be wondering. This is just my looney guess at what Heaven would be like. If it gets too religious and you get tired of a certain phrase (you'll see what I mean after reading Chapters 2 and 3) I'm terribly sorry. Gracias para el review! (Thank you for the review-That was Spanish. I like Spanish)

Reviewer: Koneko Sutano
Date: 01/07/06 21:09
Chapter: The Incredibly Boring Beginning

Before I review, I need to point something out. You seem to have the meaning of "boring" wrong. Boring equals uninteresting and dull. This story equals a bit slow paced, but very creative and undoubtly interesting. Dumbledore is so awesome, if only JKR would write a little "mini-book" like book 6.5, about... well, this. One thing: Dumbledore is a little cliched (compared to other fanfics, I mean). Well, he's Dumbledore, and you can't really write a story where Dumbledore's like, "Yo homedog peace out I am Dumbledore and I ain't got no cliches on me homedog." That would be... moderately disturbing. At least he's in character, but a little too in character. ~Koneko-san~ PS- love the name Wesley. Oh, 10/10

Author's Response: A little too in character? I suppose he is, but that's a good thing right? Thank you for the creative comment. I write other stories too, not always fanfic, but just stuff I make up. I'm too...(what's the word I'm looking for?) afraid to allow others to read the stuff I make up completely, but writng famfic seems to be working out okay. Thanks for the review! Peace out! (ha ha ha?)

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 01/07/06 12:38
Chapter: The Incredibly Boring Beginning

I agree. Very interesting. I NEED fics about Dumbledore. I crave them. He was....IS!....my fav character. I really havn't seen too fics with good ol' Dumbles since he...died*sob* Now I have inspiration for a plot bunny. [GreyLady looks thoughtful] But I won't steal yours, lol. Pleeaasse keep writing!

Author's Response: I'm glad you found it interesting. and I will most certainly keep writing. I think I'm no good at writing (stupid grammar!), but Dumbledore's death has inspired me to write Heaven. I didn't cry when he died. I was shocked that he was gone, just like that. Anyhow, I wish to apologize in advance for any big words I incorporate into future titles (get your dictionaries ready!) and religious stuff in future chapters. Have fun with your bunny plot!

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 12/14/05 17:24
Chapter: The Incredibly Boring Beginning

That was intersting, and definitely intriguing. I think Dumbledore was slightly out of character... but then again he is Dumbledore, so really, can you honestly describe Dumbledore's character? I think you placed to much emphasis on the names thing and also, I think you should change Wesley's name because I was reading it rather quickly and thought you named him Weasley, and I was all like, "Its Uncle Bilius!" Also, I think the chapter should have another name besides Chappie One... thats really not good. Still, its a very intriguing first chapter and I expect great things to come in future chappies!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. Sorry about the name emphasis. I thought it was rather funny. As for Wesley, you're completely right. It does sort of look like Weasly. I didn't mean to confuse you. I would change it, but I'm rather fond of the name Wesley. By the way, I changed my first chapter's name. It's rather boring, but I'll try to come up with more interesting names for my future chappies!

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