Reviews For Heaven
Reviewer: Smellycat710
Date: 10/03/07 14:28
Chapter: Athena's Pernicious Plan

Bwwwaaaaaahhhaahhha! Athena in WICKED!

Author's Response: Being the antagonist, Athena has been portrayed in an unfavorable light, and she's really quite mean to her servants. I think she might be nice deep, deep, deep, ect. down inside, or she might be misguided by lust for power....typical.

Reviewer: Smellycat710
Date: 10/03/07 14:27
Chapter: The Council of God

Okkkkk, this is gettin a little weird.
Harry in a loin cloth.
I'll get back to you.

Author's Response: Um...that does sound weird. Harry in a loincloth. Actually, it's the god Pan who looks like Harry in a loincloth. I've skimmed through some websites that say Pan is the god of the countryside or something. Maybe I should have Pan wearing a shephard (spellcheck needed!) boy's outfit?

Reviewer: Smellycat710
Date: 10/03/07 14:24
Chapter: The Chase is On

Cligghanger!! I LOVE cliffhagers!
I know WEIRD! lol
Great Chapter!

Author's Response: Wow, this is your third review! I appreciate your comments, because they boost my moral...a lot! Thanks!

Reviewer: Smellycat710
Date: 10/03/07 14:23
Chapter: Gruesome Gitters


Stay Away !!!! She's mad!

Author's Response: I love that line! Reminds me a bit of myself when I'm in a really, really bad mood. My poor sister takes the brunt of my wrath.

Reviewer: Smellycat710
Date: 10/03/07 14:22
Chapter: An Anomalous Altercation

You play Dummbledore wonderfully!

Author's Response: Well, if I didn't I'd be persecuted to no end. Besides, Dumbledore is one of my favorite characters!

Reviewer: Smellycat710
Date: 10/03/07 14:20
Chapter: The Incredibly Boring Beginning

I like the beginning! Lets see how the rest of the stoy goes.
Is it time for Dummbles to see what his meddleing causes?
I loved the summary! :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 09/08/07 17:46
Chapter: Two Brothers

Let's see, we have Regulus, Joanna, Sirius and Billius. Where are Lily and James? I was hoping to see them in one of the main characters. You didn't kill them, did you? Where are they? 10/10

Author's Response: I haven't even considered where Lily and James might be. Though they are somewhere in Heaven...buried with the majority of souls. There are only two thousand or so sprinkles. The other souls are imprisoned elsewhere. They haven't been demised/killed or anything...they're just not (sadly) part of the story. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: severusmagic
Date: 07/17/07 3:22
Chapter: An Anomalous Altercation

these have been some interesting chapters and I like the idea you have, it's quite original. Also it's quite well written, but some things don't quite sound dumbledorish. Isn't he always merry and serene etc?

Author's Response: People can change, put in unfamiliar circumstancs. Though if Dumbledore seems a bit out of character, I'm sorry... 'Well written' you say: thanks!

Reviewer: clabbert2101
Date: 07/14/07 17:43
Chapter: Broken

you know, i kind-of guessed the sprinkles used to be humans...

Author's Response: Where else would the human souls in Heaven have gone? Your guess was a good one!

Reviewer: Rechelle Malfoy
Date: 07/14/07 0:05
Chapter: The Incredibly Boring Beginning

i tried reading it but got really depressed. i caaaaaaaaaaaaant believe he's gone Wah

Author's Response: Heaven is anything but depressing, but it's okay.Besides, he's not really gone, at least not from our hearts.

Reviewer: Lunar_Essence
Date: 07/09/07 13:12
Chapter: The Final Fractious Fight

Like I said before, I love LOVE this story and your imagination. It's so interesting how you depict the Greek Gods and Goddesses. Oh and who can forget the Sprinkles? Keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter, which I see is in queue.

Author's Response: My interesting way of depicting the gods and goddesses is due to my laziness. It's a good thing my imagination is making up for my inconsistencies. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Last HP Relative
Date: 07/08/07 15:05
Chapter: The Final Fractious Fight

whoa nice cliffy there, i was hanging off my seat!!
this is a realy funny and entertaining story. its hard to imagine the gods like that. well keep up the awsome work!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm at a loss for words here...

Reviewer: Lunar_Essence
Date: 06/18/07 6:19
Chapter: Wesley and Xavier… and Athena’s Return

I must say, your imagination is fantastic. I'm thoroughly enjoying this fic because of its pure creativity. Just discovered it yesterday and can't wait for more. Keep up the great job.

Author's Response: My imagination has never been so flattered. Oh no. It has a mind of its own. Er, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: clabbert2101
Date: 06/15/07 22:25
Chapter: Wesley and Xavier… and Athena’s Return

and so, the confrontation begins.....GO TEAM DUMBY!!!!

Author's Response: Chapter 12 is when the confrontation gets worse...

Reviewer: LilykinsLove
Date: 06/15/07 12:01
Chapter: The Incredibly Boring Beginning

I like the sprinkles!!! They're cute. I hope I'm a sprinkle!! ;)

Author's Response: Well, to be a sprinkle you have to be dead. I'm thinking you're not dead (unless you're the living dead) and so you can't be a sprinkle...yet. In any case, I'm sure Wesley and Illka will be glad they have a fan.

Reviewer: travelgirl
Date: 06/15/07 6:02
Chapter: Wesley and Xavier… and Athena’s Return

where would they go indeed....

Author's Response: I doubt anyone knows the answer to that question.So, maybe it's rhetorical?

Reviewer: clabbert2101
Date: 06/09/07 22:38
Chapter: The Hidden Evil


Author's Response: Yes, his presence was very unexpected. Plus...he can sort of zap people. Anyway, let's hope things turn out well.

Reviewer: dracoluvr525
Date: 06/09/07 10:51
Chapter: The Hidden Evil

This is an awesome fanfic. I love it!

Author's Response: Love is a strong word. No one knows that more than Dumbledore. In any case, I'm glad you enjoyed my fanfic enough to love it!

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 06/05/07 8:45
Chapter: He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named’s Reviling Response

I love it that you update so quickly. Really there should be more authors like you, especially since I am enjoying your story so much.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 06/03/07 20:43
Chapter: The Simple Solution

Thanks for such a quick update. Do it again. I just love the originality of this story.

Author's Response: I'm planning to take a break when I reach chapter thirteen. You see, I'm facing an evil called writer's block. Curse you, writer's block. Ahem, thanks for reviewing!

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