Dee-AMN! I don't see why it's called Broke--oh, nevermind. Haha. That was....wow. That was damn. Haha. Bloody amazing, that's what it was.
i lovee it!!!! the ending.....pahahahahaaa...thatss funnyy! (:
That was so swwet. I really enjoyed it XD
I loved this, it was fantastic, and just how i imagined them all to be. I liked the line 'oh Evans not the face...' and also the pensieve moment at the end. You're going on my favourites.
The ending was a nice twist, simple but very sweet, good job.
great story. the last part freaked me out a bit but that is just me =)
That is soooo sweet! Such a nice surprise, the Pensieve!
that was a cute story. i liked the way you brought it into the future, by showing the older lily and james looking into the pensieve. very creative.
That was really cute. I loved it when Lily got a little tipsy. It was hillariose. Congrats on this story!!!
Aww, cute. Nice ending *grins naughtily*
wow that was a really amazing story one of the best lily/ james ones that i've read
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :)
i loved lily saying she had no idea but she knew it ( & an apprehensive james is even more adorable!)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! ^_^
this was very cute i loved it! keep writing!
Author's Response: thank you! ^^
lol, that is great.
Author's Response: Thankies. ;)
Beautiful way of writing short stories... truly lovely indeed....
I would never expect the two of them to have sex in their seventh year... but then again, who knows???
Cheers!
Naughty_n_nice
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your compliments, they mean a lot to me! ^^
Niiiice. It reminds me of the "Behind the Mask" story.
Author's Response: I've never read "Behind the Mask," but I'll assume it was a good one :) Thanks for reviewing!
This is one of the best Lily and James stories I've read. And, mind you, I've read quite a few. I think it's very well written. There is only one problem, a woman that far into her pregnancy cannot be sexualy active. It's not important though, it fits into the story nicely. The way you left it to the imagination was a very good idea. Some people actually explain in detail, your way is much better. 110% A++
Author's Response: Thanks for all the compliments, you wouldn't believe how happy it makes me to see them! ^___^
This is one of the best Lily and James stories I've read. And, mind you, I've read quite a few. I think it's very well written. There is only one problem, a woman that far into her pregnancy cannot be sexualy active. It's not important though, it fits into the story nicely. The way you left it to the imagination was a very good idea. Some people actually explain in detail, your way is much better. 110% A++
