Reviews For Broken Promises
Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 06/26/08 14:20
Chapter: The Beginning

Dee-AMN! I don't see why it's called Broke--oh, nevermind. Haha. That was....wow. That was damn. Haha. Bloody amazing, that's what it was.

Reviewer: harrypotterNERD
Date: 06/23/08 12:39
Chapter: The Beginning

i lovee it!!!! the ending.....pahahahahaaa...thatss funnyy! (:

Reviewer: dumblond-katie
Date: 04/13/08 5:30
Chapter: The Beginning

That was so swwet. I really enjoyed it XD

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/01/08 18:24
Chapter: The Beginning

I loved this, it was fantastic, and just how i imagined them all to be. I liked the line 'oh Evans not the face...' and also the pensieve moment at the end. You're going on my favourites.

Reviewer: midnight ink
Date: 09/11/07 12:32
Chapter: The Beginning

The ending was a nice twist, simple but very sweet, good job.

Reviewer: Ginevra Potter 17
Date: 07/30/07 22:24
Chapter: The Beginning

great story. the last part freaked me out a bit but that is just me =)

Reviewer: BringPadfootBack
Date: 05/10/07 20:34
Chapter: The Beginning

That is soooo sweet! Such a nice surprise, the Pensieve!

Reviewer: paintedbyglamour
Date: 03/19/07 17:41
Chapter: The Beginning

that was a cute story. i liked the way you brought it into the future, by showing the older lily and james looking into the pensieve. very creative.

Reviewer: Ginny_N_Harry
Date: 02/20/07 12:19
Chapter: The Beginning

That was really cute. I loved it when Lily got a little tipsy. It was hillariose. Congrats on this story!!!

Reviewer: Nomugglegirl
Date: 01/16/07 18:12
Chapter: The Beginning

good wrirting purty spiffy

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva
Date: 12/17/06 17:40
Chapter: The Beginning

Aww, cute. Nice ending *grins naughtily*

Reviewer: BlackPearl
Date: 10/16/06 15:34
Chapter: The Beginning

wow that was a really amazing story one of the best lily/ james ones that i've read

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: GinnyMWPotter
Date: 09/22/06 18:16
Chapter: The Beginning

Aw

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/11/06 11:18
Chapter: The Beginning

i loved lily saying she had no idea but she knew it ( & an apprehensive james is even more adorable!)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! ^_^

Reviewer: bgsthpfanever
Date: 08/29/06 13:29
Chapter: The Beginning

this was very cute i loved it! keep writing!

Author's Response: thank you! ^^

Reviewer: MusicGirle
Date: 07/22/06 23:33
Chapter: The Beginning

lol, that is great.

Author's Response: Thankies. ;)

Reviewer: Naughty_n_nice
Date: 06/17/06 4:54
Chapter: The Beginning

Beautiful way of writing short stories... truly lovely indeed....

I would never expect the two of them to have sex in their seventh year... but then again, who knows???

Cheers!

Naughty_n_nice

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your compliments, they mean a lot to me! ^^

Reviewer: brokenhearted
Date: 05/13/06 20:08
Chapter: The Beginning

Niiiice. It reminds me of the "Behind the Mask" story.

Author's Response: I've never read "Behind the Mask," but I'll assume it was a good one :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: WannaBeMrsRonWeasly
Date: 05/12/06 16:03
Chapter: The Beginning

This is one of the best Lily and James stories I've read. And, mind you, I've read quite a few. I think it's very well written. There is only one problem, a woman that far into her pregnancy cannot be sexualy active. It's not important though, it fits into the story nicely. The way you left it to the imagination was a very good idea. Some people actually explain in detail, your way is much better. 110% A++

Author's Response: Thanks for all the compliments, you wouldn't believe how happy it makes me to see them! ^___^

Reviewer: WannaBeMrsRonWeasly
Date: 05/12/06 14:55
Chapter: The Beginning

This is one of the best Lily and James stories I've read. And, mind you, I've read quite a few. I think it's very well written. There is only one problem, a woman that far into her pregnancy cannot be sexualy active. It's not important though, it fits into the story nicely. The way you left it to the imagination was a very good idea. Some people actually explain in detail, your way is much better. 110% A++

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