Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 08/29/08 10:03
Chapter: An Eventful Holiday Season (part 2)

amazing ending!!!!
please continue!
cupcakes forever and always!,
Lilia

Author's Response: Thanks :) I was quite proud of this ending actually *sheepish grin*

Reviewer: Lily6161
Date: 08/27/08 15:48
Chapter: A Clever Plan

This was really good! better than chapter 1!

Author's Response: Yes, believe me they all get better as they go along...the more you write the better you become I suppose. Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: Lily6161
Date: 08/27/08 15:43
Chapter: Strange Feelings

this is SUCH a good story! i decide to finish after chapter 1, so this ones a keeper!!

Author's Response: Haha thank you ever so much.

Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange
Date: 08/25/08 16:32
Chapter: An Eventful Holiday Season (part 2)

this is really good please add some more chapters soon

Author's Response: Thank you, and more chapters are being written :)

Reviewer: mon18
Date: 08/24/08 22:25
Chapter: An Eventful Holiday Season (part 2)

wow this chapter is just full of surprises! it was good! but wtf was up with all the random numbers thru the last half? it rlly took away fron the story

Author's Response: Hehe thank you. - Thanks so much for telling me that - must have been some error on the internet or something because they certainly weren't there when I was editing it! Thanks again.

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 08/24/08 8:44
Chapter: An Eventful Holiday Season (part 2)

*sniffles* that was really sad
and then i really did like the breakfast bit that sirius cooked hehehehehe

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I hope you enjoyed the chapter as a whole...

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 08/04/08 19:58
Chapter: An Eventful Holiday Season (part one)

OH. MY. GOD. !!!!! poor Sarah and William!!!!

. .
O

please continue! 1 thing, you haven;'t really described your OC's, I have no idea what Sarah and Carmen look like, although i know the Carmen has dark hair, is Sarah blonde? curly or straight? same question for even Lily,as I've read that her hair is really curly and short, pin straight and medium length or just wavy and long,

please continue and reply maybe!,
cupcakes forever and always,
Lilia

Author's Response: I know...a very terrible occurence. Oooh thank you so much for telling me that. I will really make sure I add more description in my chapters...sometimes it's hard not to get lost in the dialogue... Many thanks :)

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 08/04/08 19:06
Chapter: Spilled Beans

again with the endings!!! no complaints!
please continue!
Lilia

Author's Response: :) Thanks.

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 08/04/08 18:41
Chapter: An Unexpected Occurence

ahah! loved the ending again, ur god at ending things....
please continue!
Lilia

Author's Response: Good, thank you very much.

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 08/04/08 18:35
Chapter: A Clever Plan

ahhhahha! loved the ending!!!!!!!!
please continue!!!
Lilia

Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad!

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 08/04/08 17:16
Chapter: Strange Feelings

yay! great job! please continue!!
Lilia

Author's Response: Thank you, and I will.

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/03/08 15:19
Chapter: An Eventful Holiday Season (part one)

ooooh, bad ending for little miss sarah. I'm not being mean, in fact, i'm being sympathetic.

Author's Response: It sure was...thanks for the review.

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/03/08 14:46
Chapter: Spilled Beans

Good, wonderful. I'm sorry, it's just I'm running out of compliments. My complimentary compliments book is very small you see, well, at least the chapter about fanfics online. No offense.

Author's Response: Ah...none taken. Well thanks anyway - and don't worry, I run out of ways to say thank you as well. :)

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/03/08 14:35
Chapter: An Unexpected Occurence

good...good...i'm about to fall asleep, and ...no...it's *yawn* not your... story...

Author's Response: Okay...not sure what to make of that...but thanks for taking the time to review :)

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/03/08 14:30
Chapter: A Clever Plan

Wonderful, great, awesome, cool. I suppose I should stop talking like this. But it was wonderful, great, awesome, and cool. I am not being sarcastic.

Author's Response: Thank you...I guess I little repetition never hurt anyone...

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/03/08 14:26
Chapter: Wrong Side of the Bed

Oh hoho. Sounds like something good is going to happen (quite obviously).

Author's Response: Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/03/08 14:22
Chapter: Strange Feelings

Awwww, How cute. I'm not being sarcastic!

Author's Response: heh heh thanks.

Reviewer: soccerlover4always
Date: 06/26/08 13:53
Chapter: An Eventful Holiday Season (part one)

Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I will be updating in the next couple of weeks! I'm so sorry for the delay. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Dan Fan
Date: 03/24/08 15:08
Chapter: An Eventful Holiday Season (part one)

It was damm sexy

Author's Response: Erm thanks I think!

Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 03/03/08 6:41
Chapter: Strange Feelings

That was great!!!!!!!!!!! Splendid job... cant wait for the next chapter... Plz update soon... lol... its really nice..

Author's Response: Thank you - keep reading, I will be updating in the next week or so.

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