Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 12/17/05 6:32
Chapter: Strange Feelings

Aww sweet. Is it just me or does nearly every girl (and some guys) reading Lily/James fic desperately want to see James? God he sounds hot! Anyway, brilliant story! Please post the next chapter soon.

Author's Response: ha ha! thanks! I know what you mean! thanks again and I will make sure the next chapter comes soon!

Reviewer: Sirius Krummy Fan
Date: 12/15/05 20:21
Chapter: Strange Feelings

Aww...how cute! Amazing and to the point! Keep it ip! Update soon!

Author's Response: ahh thanks!! I will - the second chapter's in queue!

Author's Response: ahh thanks!! I will - the second chapter's in queue!

Reviewer: Secret Seeker
Date: 12/14/05 12:41
Chapter: Strange Feelings

Oh, my ! This fanfic is Brilliant. At least I really liked this chapter. It's satright foreword, doesn't linger. But you could have explained more Sarah and Carmen's characters and make the chapter longer. But all in all it's all VERY good.

Author's Response: wow thanks! I wanted the beginning chapter to mainly be about Lily and James, but you'll be reading about Sarah and Carmen a lot more later on in the story... thanks for the tip though!

Reviewer: FanficWriterNikki
Date: 12/13/05 15:31
Chapter: Strange Feelings

I like it, but one thing. Lily seemed to really hate James. I don't think outer appearance can make those feelings completely change. Maybe you want to include a personality change?

Author's Response: Yeah, it was a bit of a sudden change of heart, I admit that I didn't show his change of personality too well in this chapter - It will be a bit more obvious in the next one dont worry! thanks for the tip. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, it was a bit of a sudden change of heart, I admit that I didn't show his change of personality too well in this chapter - It will be a bit more obvious in the next one dont worry! thanks for the tip. :)

Reviewer: mrs james potter
Date: 12/11/05 4:23
Chapter: Strange Feelings

Really cute one:D update soon:D

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter's in the making...

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