Reviewer: Lillian Potter
Date: 01/22/06 19:19
Chapter: Prologue: The Journey Begins

That was very good, although a bit short. It's been a while, so PLS update SOON!!! luv ur fic,

Lily

Reviewer: JKRwannabe
Date: 01/22/06 18:23
Chapter: Prologue: The Journey Begins

Wow. That was very good, I liked it. Update soon, ok?

Reviewer: honeydukeschoclate
Date: 01/21/06 19:04
Chapter: Prologue: The Journey Begins

This chapter was really interesting seeing Lily think about her whole life in a short space of time like that. When Alice was saying to give "him" a chance, does she men James or Vernon? It was a little unclear, but whatever. I'm sticking around, so update asap!

Reviewer: honeydukeschoclate
Date: 01/08/06 15:45
Chapter: Godric's Hollow. Halloween. 1981

PLEASE UPDATE! It's a great idea and the first chapter started off with a bang...wow. Just one question. Is this James/Lily looking into Harry's life? Or them reflecting on things that have already happened? Either way, I'm sticking around to see! Good job!

Reviewer: DrTaylor
Date: 01/08/06 13:07
Chapter: Godric's Hollow. Halloween. 1981

I would really like to see an update to this. It's a great idea and a great start.

Reviewer: KateH
Date: 01/08/06 12:20
Chapter: Godric's Hollow. Halloween. 1981

great start, update soon! i love it so far! =)

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 01/04/06 9:46
Chapter: Godric's Hollow. Halloween. 1981

keep updating, i can't wait to read this!

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 01/04/06 9:46
Chapter: Godric's Hollow. Halloween. 1981

keep updating, i can't wait to read this!

Reviewer: Lillian Potter
Date: 12/19/05 3:11
Chapter: Godric's Hollow. Halloween. 1981

WONDERFUL!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!! UPDATE NOW!!!!! 10/10 !!!!

Reviewer: Salina43
Date: 12/12/05 20:21
Chapter: Godric's Hollow. Halloween. 1981

nice job, oh its so sad.... Hope you update soon! I really like it so far

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