Reviewer: lightning_crashes11
Date: 04/16/06 0:21
Chapter: Reunions and Remembrances

fantastic. Awesome. by all means keep writing! different to alot of the ones i have read. bit more original. i like it.

Reviewer: lightning_crashes11
Date: 04/16/06 0:13
Chapter: The Choice

i would describe it as near perfect. Clever that poem at the start. Did u write it? its very god

Reviewer: Thegirlwithgreeneyes
Date: 04/14/06 19:33
Chapter: Reunions and Remembrances

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Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 04/02/06 12:38
Chapter: The Choice

I have to say that I'm really enjoying this story. I don't think it was cheesy at all. James' idea to just blurt out the gut reaction might be something that kids do, but it is also something that psychologists use (usually with ink blots and such, but it is still used). You do have to show Lily and James as being somewhat young. They were newlyweds and would still have that lovey dovey attitude towards each other. I love how protective Lily is of Harry. I look forward to seeing what Lily's parents are doing on the road. Maybe they will have a few more times of contacting Harry through his Grandparents. That would be pretty cool. Petunia might need a visit or two also. That might even be why she takes Harry in. Just my thoughts. Your story really has my mind going with ideas. :) I like that!

Reviewer: cutie_blaire
Date: 04/01/06 17:58
Chapter: The Choice

I Luv it, it wasn't cheesy, keep up the great work

Reviewer: nicegurl
Date: 04/01/06 17:37
Chapter: The Choice

LOVE IT! i wouldnt change a thing

Reviewer: emmad
Date: 04/01/06 15:24
Chapter: The Choice

that is one of the cutest stories i've ever read- their background (their life before) seemed real to what we already know of the characters. put up another chapter! xox

Reviewer: harryssis
Date: 04/01/06 13:06
Chapter: The Choice

This story is so cool. I love it!!!!!!!

Reviewer: themodernmarauders
Date: 03/25/06 23:15
Chapter: The Choice

please hurry with your next chap.... i love this story

Reviewer: themodernmarauders
Date: 03/24/06 4:04
Chapter: The Choice

aww thats such a sweet story i love how their doing it all together keep the chapters coming please ;)

Reviewer: harrahagrid45
Date: 03/05/06 10:50
Chapter: The Choice

I absolutly loved it!!! I can't wait to see how the rest of the story plays out! I like the idea that you are playing with so it should be fun to see what you decide to do with the rest of the story. Update soon!

Reviewer: honeydukeschoclate
Date: 03/04/06 12:24
Chapter: The Choice

I did not think this chapter was cheesy at all! If you pose your thoughts that way, you will never earn confidence as a writer. It was every bit worth the long wait. I can't wait to see about Lily's parents. 10/10

Reviewer: HJaneWeasley
Date: 02/27/06 21:26
Chapter: On the Road to Heaven

it's great! Your ideas are so creative and fresh, and there's a min. # of typos (typos just set me off. I can't stand them). Keep updating, please!!!!!!

Reviewer: miss_songbreeze_624
Date: 02/17/06 20:51
Chapter: Godric's Hollow. Halloween. 1981

I LOVE THIS!!! I hope you update soon!!! It's killin' me!!

Reviewer: harrahagrid45
Date: 02/06/06 18:42
Chapter: On the Road to Heaven

I really enjoyed this chapter. I like the idea of Lily being over protective, boy is she going to have a fit when she sees what Harry gets into later in his life. Please Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 01/28/06 18:27
Chapter: On the Road to Heaven

That was really good, I love to read these types of stories. I must say that Lily is one of my favorites, and you do an excellent job of writing her. keep it up!

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 01/28/06 18:26
Chapter: On the Road to Heaven

That was really good, I love to read these types of stories. I must say that Lily is one of my favorites, and you do an excellent job of writing her. keep it up!

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 01/28/06 18:24
Chapter: On the Road to Heaven

That was really good, I love to read these types of stories. I must say that Lily is one of my favorites, and you do an excellent job of writing her. keep it up!

Reviewer: honeydukeschoclate
Date: 01/24/06 18:51
Chapter: On the Road to Heaven

Another kicking chapter! I like how Lily is all overprotective, it's really realistic. I thought it was great how James called her Tiger Lily. Is that veil the one from the Department of Mysteries? That's what it reminded me of anyway... I'm looking for an update soon! You are a quick updater, you plowed right on through these last two chapters!

Reviewer: harrahagrid45
Date: 01/22/06 19:41
Chapter: Prologue: The Journey Begins

I really enjoyed it. I like the idea you are working with about Lily Potter. It should be interesting to see how the rest of the story unfolds. Update soon!

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