Luna is one of the best characters, so it's nice to see a story about her.My favourite part of the story is the part that says sometimes balloons burst and sometimes they have to be let go, that sounds like a wise proverb.
Thats really, really good. Luna is one of my favourite characters.
Thats an excellent story. It has balloons in it. I think balloons are lots of fun to play with. Luna is my favourite character, too! This is one of my favourite stories.
What a good story! I didn't think anybody would write a tale about balloons. I like balloons. Did you know, they work better if you fill them with water?
So sad, so very sad. Incredibly well-written and poigniant. I loved this - I hadn't really thought of Luna or her history deeply before but this was very, very good. Keep up the good work!!!
This is going in my favorites! The imagery was great! The wording was perfect! I want to give Luna a big hug! I have been reduced to only speaking with exclamation points! Ten out of Ten!
This was just... wow. I mean.... wow. I've never read a story like this. Its so hard to put Luna in a light where she's not just there for comic relief. In fact, I have only seen Jo herself do it before. But you've managed to transform a comical character into a real person with feelings and most importantly, pain. Thanks for a wonderful experience.