Reviewer: cmbluey98
Date: 09/24/10 17:54
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

i think i peed myself !!!!! ps my friend will reget me reading this come chirtmast time:)

Reviewer: WhateverForever26
Date: 01/23/08 17:41
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

So funny. It's sort of like a story I read about Voldemorts 12 days of Christmas.
Keep it up!

Reviewer: phoenixrebirth
Date: 01/04/08 17:37
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

Eight missing heirlooms oh I can so see that happening.(starts rolling on the floor laughing again)Fantastic job!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Cirelondiel
Date: 11/28/07 3:08
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

Hehe, this is very funny.

My only thought is: it might be better to say house-elves, not house-elf, since it’s two of them – I think it would make more sense that way.

Still, it’s fun working out which gifts were from Kreacher and which were from Dobby. And the last one, of course, must be both of them :-)

Anyway, well done! This is a lovely light-hearted HP Christmas song. It’s very amusing.

~ Chelsea

Reviewer: callmehermione
Date: 10/15/07 22:18
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

Hey, SPEW buddy. Well, you didn't have a SPEW review for this story, but I realise that may be rather difficult. I do love very much how you incorporated things that Dobby and Kreacher actually have given/would give Harry for Christmas instead of sticking in random items from the Potterverse.

The only thing I would suggest is the sock thing - the term is 'mismatched socks,' not 'mix-matched socks.' Gah. I keep typing socks as sox. No idea what's wrong with me.

Ah, well, this was definitely a nice song. And yes, I was singing it in my head as I was reading. Maybe I'll sing it for you this Christmas. *cough* I remember thinking this challenge ridiculous when I first came across it, but I see you've done a very good job of it.

Reviewer: tha_looney_one
Date: 10/08/07 16:29
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

*gets up off ground, grumbling and pondering why I even read humor, as it's incredibly painful when done well* Well, you did warn me. *sighs* Anway, I thought that after seeing this prompt a billion times, it would get old, but every single one I've read has been completely origanal. Kudos to you for this interesting POV.

Author's Response: Thank you. Hopefully it wasn't too painful when you fell! :)

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 09/23/07 12:41
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!! Great


Author's Response: :) thanks

Reviewer: Alas123623
Date: 05/21/07 6:29
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

Sorry did i mentiopn last time that it was hysterical? it was :)

Author's Response: :) thank you!

Reviewer: Alas123623
Date: 05/21/07 6:28
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

Noce one!! I thought thoughthat some rewording in som eplaces might be smart like: Five paintings of me and Seven mis-matched socks,

Author's Response: ah, that is true, but in the books, the paintings are always called portraits, so I wanted to stay with canon. But thank you for the thought and the read!

Reviewer: Elissy
Date: 04/03/07 13:04
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

Haha, cute. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 02/15/07 8:43
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

lol


Author's Response: :) thank you!

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 11/11/06 17:39
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

I observed warning and therefore did not spit soda out my nose....but I am glad I observed the warning!

I'm also considering making a little Christmas CD of me singing this...

Author's Response: LOLOLOLOL! You're the best!

Reviewer: lipid2
Date: 09/18/06 17:44
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

that..... is awesome

Author's Response: :) thanks!

Reviewer: hp_fangal
Date: 09/14/06 10:04
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

I love it! This is absolutely hilarious!

Author's Response: I'm quite amused by all the people reading this in September! lol, thanks!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 09/11/06 21:07
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

Lol! That's really all I can say to this fic. :D

Author's Response: :) thanks!

Reviewer: sophiarol
Date: 07/01/06 17:13
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

LAUGH OUT LOUD. I loved it!

Author's Response: :) Thank you!

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 06/13/06 17:20
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

That's pretty funny. Dobby is so sincere, but he definitely has odd taste. Socks that don't match...portraits of--er--Harry...

And isn't Kreacher just a bundle of kindness...and thoughtfulness...I mean, who wouldn't want maggots for Christmas, seriously?

Very nice...

TOMROHT

Author's Response: lol, I'm glad you could enjoy this, even in June! Thanks!!!

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 05/18/06 9:13
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

teehee..nice one!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: BanglaBuddy
Date: 04/21/06 20:53
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

LOL

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 03/10/06 9:13
Chapter: On the First Day of Christmas my House-elf Gave to me

HeeHeeHee! LOL! Funny version of the twelve days of Christmas! Yay!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wrote this for the Winter Snows challenge. I didn't win anything, but I'm certainly happy people still like it! That's better than 20 points to Hufflepuff any day!

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