Reviewer: RonandHermioneforever
Date: 12/12/05 20:19
Chapter: One-Shot

omg...that was sooo good! I LOVED it! I suddenly got a warm chill!:] You described it so well! It was AWESOME! Happy Holidays!

Author's Response: Yay! I can see by your screenname why you liked it so much ;). Thanks so much and Happy Holidays to you as well!

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 12/12/05 15:09
Chapter: One-Shot

Yay! well done =) I liked how you portrayed Hermione in this. Good job!

Author's Response: So glad people approve of Hermione here. I often have to monitor myself to keep from making her exactly like me. Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: Berylla Chubb
Date: 12/12/05 13:52
Chapter: One-Shot

Very sweet. I was curious; is the Santa Claus story an actual fairy tale or did you make it up? Either way, I really liked your story.

Author's Response: Thanks Berylla :). As I mentioned in the Author's Note, the Magic Pomegranate Tree is originally from The Santa Claus Book - clicking on the link will bring you straight to its Amazon.com page if you're interested in finding out more about it. The one thing I will say is that I've paraphrased and changed it a bit to fit with the Harry Potter universe a bit better. Thank you so much for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Ravensgryff
Date: 12/12/05 13:33
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow! I loved it! Very romantic and sweet, beautifully paced, just the right amount of tension. The story that Ron told Hermione was great as well. It reminded me of how my husband used to tell me stories at night to help me sleep *blushing*. I almost paused where he says that he and Harry would miss her, but I think you justified it pretty well and it wasn't out of character for him. I like the bolder Hermione; it fits with the changes her character has undergone throughout the series. Wonderful job; this is going in my favorites!

Author's Response: That's actually the kind of sweetness I was going for (really cute anecdote you have there). I tried to cover my back with Bold!Hermione and Romantic!Ron by setting the story after Bill and Fleur's wedding - the suggestion I'm trying to make there is that that event sort of made something snap in place. Nothing like learning by example right? Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: The Swedish freaks
Date: 12/12/05 12:48
Chapter: One-Shot

so sweet I really enjoyed it...no, I loved it!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yay for international HP fans!

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