Reviews For First Kisses
Reviewer: starryeyedd
Date: 07/04/06 12:56
Chapter: First Kisses

Wow sums it up. This story is beautifully written, and seems like something that would be in a Harry Potter book, had the series not been PG ;) It relates to the characters and is very believable. Unlike some other fan fictions of pairings, it's not a fairy tale but a story of passion, awkwardness, and first kisses. I read it about 5 times. :P I love it. Keep on writing - I hope you write another chapter. :)

Reviewer: rebelde_artiste
Date: 07/04/06 1:17
Chapter: First Kisses

i think there should be more added chapters to this.... it could turn out to be a really good novel of a story

Reviewer: pottergirl94
Date: 06/26/06 12:38
Chapter: First Kisses

It was good. Showing Ron as a man who dosen't take advantic is perfect.

Reviewer: hermyron
Date: 06/25/06 6:34
Chapter: First Kisses

wow!

Reviewer: Delight is sour
Date: 06/25/06 5:32
Chapter: First Kisses

Brilliant, just brilliant

Reviewer: 4evahpluva17
Date: 06/23/06 7:51
Chapter: First Kisses

i agree with Ron that was amazing, it was so good i cam back and read it a second time, the intensity came at the right place and everything! I LOVED IT!

Reviewer: Roonil Wazlib rocks
Date: 06/20/06 7:56
Chapter: First Kisses

That was brilliant, I loved every word of it and I could have killed the person that called me while I was reading this!!

Reviewer: DeathByMoonlight
Date: 06/08/06 16:03
Chapter: First Kisses

Brilliant. Bloody, bloody brilliant! Please write another chapter!
Ron doesn`t seem to me like the kind of person to stop when it reached that kind of level-but here it was totaly believable!
PLEASE write another chapter-with this much or even more intamacy...! 10/10

Reviewer: Growingmandrakes
Date: 06/01/06 13:41
Chapter: First Kisses

*Picks herself up from the floor using a bucket as she is now a poodle of goo."
That was AMAZING. I loved your story. WOW. I can't believe how close they were to actually.... Wow.

Reviewer: minerva18
Date: 05/31/06 21:09
Chapter: First Kisses

This is my favorite ron/hermione story ever! I love it!

Reviewer: Journeyman
Date: 05/28/06 13:45
Chapter: First Kisses

This is very well written. I'm rather new here and I haven't had a chance to browse through many stories, but this is one of the best I have read so far. No saga-like chapters, no complicated plots, just Ron and 'Mione and the best moment one could imagine about them. Good luck in your future fan-fictioning endeavours!

Reviewer: calaiscat
Date: 05/14/06 14:59
Chapter: First Kisses

that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 05/09/06 0:49
Chapter: First Kisses

Woooo fluff! But thats ok. i wouldnt have read it if i didnt think it was tastefull. And it was. Im sure we all get into situations like They were in at least once in our life. Well written!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 05/09/06 0:49
Chapter: First Kisses

Woooo fluff! But thats ok. i wouldnt have read it if i didnt think it was tastefull. And it was. Im sure we all get into situations like They were in at least once in our life. Well written!

Reviewer: bursberryok2
Date: 04/30/06 19:11
Chapter: First Kisses

love it, cute, rons last statement is the cherry on top! I mean this isnt fluff, it fluff-a-lious! Great job!!

Reviewer: i love to ship
Date: 04/30/06 14:45
Chapter: First Kisses

wow.....that was good, most one-shots are suky, but that one was bloody brilliant!!!

Reviewer: fairies_r_real
Date: 04/30/06 5:24
Chapter: First Kisses

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I am a big Ron/Hermone shipper (and Harry/Ginny shipper) and this story is brilliant!!! Keep up the good work. You should really do a sequel to this (perhaps two years later!!!). 10/10 x x x long live the fairies x x x

Reviewer: Menie7
Date: 04/28/06 15:45
Chapter: First Kisses

I love the way you wrote this, I love that you did put a little bit of humor to the story...thanks for not letting anything else happen between them. It wouldn't have been right...just not now...OMG! But they're so perfect for each other...keep up your writing..!

Reviewer: fluffahoy
Date: 04/21/06 9:30
Chapter: First Kisses

brilliant! quite sweet, but the extra passion was a little...unexpected, you know? keep it up...

Reviewer: xPrincessWeasleyx
Date: 04/19/06 15:05
Chapter: First Kisses

That was great!! Really well written..10/10 =p
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