So good! I loved it!
amazing.... wow for once im speechless
Tat ws a great story! You are and awesome writer!
That was a wonderful fic! You captured Ron and Hermione so well, and your writing style is amazing! Great job.
ohhh my god...that was SOOO good,
PLEASE PLEASE PLEAES right more
That was a fantastic story - I'd like to see more of your work on this site!
ooooooooo! i luuuuved this one! eeeeeeeekkkk it was givin me chills!
Great Romantic story.
But, i would like to say, You did very well in stopping all the non required items.
Amazing!! Really good story!! 10/10
I loved it! Really great detail, without being to much of a perv, lol.
excellent! looooove it.
That was amazingly good!!!! Finally Ron and Hermione are together. God.
its very gd i liked it very much
i loved it!! the description just sent shivers down my spine...omg plz write more!! plzzz....!!!!
so that was like amazing. i really liked it. :]
Really very beautiful. I liked your characterization of Hermione. I thouhg it was spot on! I do think they might have moved a bit fast for a "first kiss," but i suppose it is the fantacy of most boys and girls at that age. Very good story! Well done!
Wow...all I can say is wow...a little OOC for the two, but a great take on how they get together!! You write with great intensity and grace! Keep it up!