Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 08/06/08 18:24
Chapter: The Ending of a new beginning

You authors are so naughty, toying with peoples emotions like that. I've been so down while reading this, knowing they all have each other but it might not be enough to fill the void of the great losses they've suffered. And then as soon as there was a knock at the door I got this huge lump in my chest that wanted to be hope but disguised itself as apprehension. I'm so happy now i might burst, but Harry does have alot of explaining to do, six months! What on earth was he doing? I suppose i could understand him needing time to himself but he could have let them know he was still alive for Merlin's sake! Sorry, I'm just channeling the emotions of those ten survivors of the war.

Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 09/05/07 17:13
Chapter: The Ending of a new beginning

so good!! I was a bit worried that you had killed Harry but he showed up so it ended well.

Reviewer: taytay
Date: 06/14/07 19:51
Chapter: The Ending of a new beginning

i love its great!

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 12/10/05 14:06
Chapter: The Ending of a new beginning

Your writing pulled me in, and I didn't want to be brought back out. Great job! -R.P. PS: I loved your ships! =)

Reviewer: Sirius Krummy Fan
Date: 12/10/05 14:05
Chapter: The Ending of a new beginning

I really like..its so nice and original...great work! Keep it up...

Reviewer: Tania Dalyn4
Date: 12/10/05 6:40
Chapter: The Ending of a new beginning

I'm a romantic and I really liked it. I also appreciated that you let Dumbledore live! Keep writing, you have great ideas.

Reviewer: hattiepotter
Date: 12/09/05 10:22
Chapter: The Ending of a new beginning

The only thing I would say, is that you need to be a lot more descriptive and less narrative. At the moment, it is very much "He did this, she did this..." etc. You have good ideas about what happened in the Battle etc., but you need to make sure you don't just state the facts - add in more detail and mood.

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