awwwwwwwwwww sweet ending.
make em kiss plz plz plz!"!
This is a great story. I like the way you've included most of the marauders in here! Hope you update soon - keep writing!
Ok i've tried to deleat the previouse two reviews i left but i couldn't. So i want to apologieze for the huge mistake i made. Apparently yesterday i was brain dead and forgo how to read. Now that my brain is back to normal i have to say taht the title of this chapter is not at all confusing. And that this is one of the most amazing stories i've read. So once again sorry for the horrible mistake and keep the chapters coming
Ok i think i might have misinteroreted what your authors note meant and i'm really sorry about that. I actually do like the title it's one that alway's stuck in my mind but i never really understood why that was it. Well scrathc all that i compleatly and tterly misread it. It's late at night my brain isn't working corectly. But one thing hasn't changed and that is that you should update SOON. Please this is a great story i thrive off stories like this so please up date.
hey I canme back to re-read since we haven't rally had an update in a while well anyway... It the curent title from beatles song? I was thinking about a title and I came up with Twisted Fates, do you like that? I came up with it because of the whole you know melanie should be with remus and sam with sirus and lilly with james but they aren't. I thought it fit but you are the author so it's up to you. And as for your second question lilly and james defeated voldemort three times. My question to you is does this count as the first time because lilly didn't really do much and niether came in direct contact with voldy. Well anyway i hope you update soon and let me know what you think of the title.
yes it was spelled right, i think...
Hey, I don't know if you purposely did this, but you wrote: the theme being blue and gold, after Ravenclaw's house colors.
Ravenclaw's colors are blue and bronze.
IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON, I'LL KILL YOU.
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great story... red the entire thing in one go!! n btw.. i never found this title confusin... infact it was the only chapter i cud ges the contents of.... so i can proudly say that m a huge hp fan!! n yes do update soon...
I love that last part.:)
I cried when I finished reading this. Only it had nothing to do with what I had just read. This shows how obsessed I am with this site and this story: I cried because I was so happy that IT HAD FINALLY BEEN UPDATED!!!!!!! *giggles* I am silly, aren't I?!
OMG I LOVE THE TITLE OF THE CHAPTER! Gosh, am I in love with James. I am really and truly in love with James Potter.
i didn't think it needed any explaination. but that's just me. this is a really great story by the way. it is soooo going on my favorites list!
Love The title. OMg. James is sooo uber sweet.
wow there are really no words to describe thischapter to it's full glory. i loved it i can't wait for more up date soon pleeeeeeese
Author's Response: haha i must say i do love people like you ~SM
hurry up with the next chappie please
i love this story.
wow!! I really liked this chapter. Good job!
This chapter makes me want to cry..
~ Hannah Abbot
Was Sam the other person?
~ Hannah Abbot
So close... Love the part with Lily and the Butterbeer!
~ Hannah Abbot