Reviewer: iAMmissdelaney
Date: 10/25/07 19:33
Chapter: Masquerade

Oi. I'm getting ansty waiting for the ends of your chapters.
-giggles-
Yet I keep on reading it ALL the way, you'd think that I would be skimming down to the bottom or something.

GJ!

Reviewer: iAMmissdelaney
Date: 10/25/07 19:22
Chapter: Kissing

OH, WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE!?

-cough-
Please excuse the vulgarity of my language.
Whoah, it was a slap in the face, in my face.

Onward forth to my next chapter!

Reviewer: iAMmissdelaney
Date: 10/25/07 18:57
Chapter: Jokes on You

I am totally loling.

Her rebuttles sound a whole lot like what I would say.
-snickers-

I like how very realistic you make them.

Reviewer: ThisMustBeLove
Date: 10/25/07 3:44
Chapter: WHAT?!

"What?" Sirius spooned marmalade on his toast; his appetite had suddenly returned.


"Were you just . . . rejected?" Peter said slowly, as if this kind of information took a while to penetrate into his brain.
I loved this bit nice work!!!

Reviewer: emilyyxo1
Date: 10/23/07 16:48
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

awesomeeeeeeeee

Reviewer: stupefyx
Date: 10/21/07 20:51
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

oh my gosh, this story is amazing!!!
darn this cliffhanger! xDD
seriously, this is an AWESOME lily/james, sirius/oc fic. im really happy u didnt rush into having lily/james get together : )
UPDATE SOON!!

xDD

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 10/21/07 14:25
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

ahhhhhh i want to know what happens!!!!

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 10/21/07 10:47
Chapter: Misinterpretations

I LOVE THIS FIC.

just thought you should know.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 10/20/07 20:43
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

wow well i really liked that chapter man i wish all four would just come straight about how they really feel. they click so well. hmm i wonder what is going to happen next. up date soon. please

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 10/20/07 16:28
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

Hmmm. This is taking quite the interesting twist.

Update soon, please!

Reviewer: SiriusPotterFan1
Date: 10/20/07 13:23
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

Oooh.
Dude.
Insane.

"I suppose I wouldn't know anything about family problems," she said steadily. "My family was murdered eight years ago."

That was a GREAT line.

OMG. Looove it.

Add to favorites...

Reviewer: SiriusPotterFan1
Date: 10/19/07 20:42
Chapter: Misinterpretations

This doesn't seem cliche, actually. Just letting you know, there are a LOT of cliches on here, and this isn't one of them.

Looove it. :)

Reviewer: hpobsessed4ever_23
Date: 10/19/07 20:20
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

this took a while, but it was worth it. (well kind of, jk) great update =)

but please post the next chapter sooner than you did for this one!!!

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 10/19/07 16:03
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

Yay I'm soooo glad you finally updated! God it's just so sad that Melanie, Remus, Sam and Sirius are all still pretending they like their partner - and all know that isn't true. It's cute how Remus is such a romantic (and totaly Melanie's type :D)

Reviewer: lisapotter
Date: 10/19/07 14:59
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

oh my god!!!!!!!!!!

its been updated!!!!! i have been waiting for this forever!! !yay!

very good job by the way!

Reviewer: prongs_babe_317426
Date: 10/19/07 10:20
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

wow....this is a great chapter, lots and lots of drama. lol. great job. i loved it! update soon!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 10/19/07 1:37
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

Aw man. Wow. Just- just wow....

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 10/19/07 0:33
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

About time you updated! Anyways at least it was a good chapter. The writing was excellent and the characters hav developed really nicely :) james is so sweet! Even if he is a dick for still being with bookbag girl. James and lily will get together soon right? Please say yes! Your story is awsome update soon!!!and tht beter be a heck of a lot sooner than last time!

Reviewer: kittykat
Date: 10/18/07 22:13
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

update!!!!! i love it..i can't wait for more lily and james fluff!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 10/18/07 21:58
Chapter: What is it with all these Hair Care Products?

OOOO, so cute!! I love it!! Ah!!! it's great! update, update!!

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