Reviewer: darkangelx02
Date: 12/10/06 19:50
Chapter: The Halloween Party

yay!!! you updated!!!! god i absolutely hate Juliana!!! anyway i would give this chapter a 15/10!!

Reviewer: Lor8990
Date: 12/10/06 18:51
Chapter: The Halloween Party

just wanted to say that out of all the fan fictions about james and lily i've read yours is probably my favorite!

i especially enjoy the sam serious melanie relationship. can't wait for the next chapter!

keep up the awesome work!

Reviewer: Awakening16
Date: 12/10/06 13:40
Chapter: The Mysterious Halloween Party

so everyone is going with who they want to. execpt lily and james.
=(

Author's Response: no. sam really wants to go with Sirius, but she has to go with Remus, and vice versa for remus and mel~SM

Reviewer: Awakening16
Date: 12/10/06 13:10
Chapter: One Hell of a Hangover

ohh i love it!! and the fact that james still cares about her.

Reviewer: Awakening16
Date: 12/10/06 13:10
Chapter: One Hell of a Hangover

ohh i love it!! and the fact that james still cares about her.

Reviewer: Mischief_Managed o8
Date: 12/09/06 21:13
Chapter: The Halloween Party

I love your story so much! Please update soon & don't give up on it or anything! I'm adding this to my favorites! Keep up the great writing.

Reviewer: Awakening16
Date: 12/09/06 15:44
Chapter: Kissing

OMG

Reviewer: Awakening16
Date: 12/09/06 14:36
Chapter: Misinterpretations

kinda confusing but still goood!

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 12/08/06 17:23
Chapter: The Halloween Party

Aww...Sirius and Sam are my favorites...please don't take long to update (again ;-P), and hey! I just posted my very first story, a James/Lily fic too, and would love it if you had a look at it and told me what you think!

Reviewer: Lillian Potter
Date: 12/07/06 22:32
Chapter: The Halloween Party

OMG, AHHHHMAZING FIC!!!! Please, oh PLEASE update soon!

Author's Response: aw, thanks!

Reviewer: magicphoenix
Date: 12/07/06 19:56
Chapter: The Halloween Party

Awesome chapter!!! I loved it, especially the whole Sam/Sirius interaction. I really suggest that you put this story up in harrypotterfanfiction.com, I'm sure you would get more feedback on that site since more people go on it. I give your story 10-10!!! Very good job!!

Reviewer: fire_cookie
Date: 12/07/06 19:46
Chapter: The Halloween Party

That was such a good chapter! The thing with Sam and Sirius was soo sweet =) Melanie's annoying me a bit though...

Reviewer: ariya
Date: 12/07/06 19:34
Chapter: The Halloween Party

yay! an update =]. nice chapter. long, but thats good. cant wait for another one!

Reviewer: ariya
Date: 12/07/06 19:34
Chapter: The Halloween Party

yay! an update =]. nice chapter. long, but thats good. cant wait for another one!

Reviewer: Jeeves
Date: 12/07/06 19:31
Chapter: The Halloween Party

I absolutely LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!

Meg

Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 12/07/06 18:18
Chapter: The Halloween Party

is there gonna be more to the scene at the dance? it just seems to cut off at a random spot. the scene with Juliana was hilarious. good for Lily. =D

yourfaithfulreader.vicky*

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 12/07/06 16:32
Chapter: WHAT?!

I tried to read this before, but I kept getting confused. So, let me try and get this straight. Sam and Sirius like eachother. Sam thinks he likes Mel, who really likes Remus, who also likes her. Mel thinks that Remus likes Sam. Sam decides to make Sirius jealous so she asks Remus out. Sirius gets moody, but wants a date, so he asks Melanie to go to Hogsmeade with him, but she rejects him. Sirius decides to make Sam jealous by flirting with Melanie. Is that about right? Anyway, luv the fic, keep up the great writing!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 12/07/06 16:32
Chapter: The Halloween Party

Oh, man, this is so good! right now, i'm trying hard not to laugh out loud, cuz I'm in my living room, and people will think i'm insane. Luuuuuuuuv the drama!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 12/07/06 16:02
Chapter: WHAT?!

I tried to read this before, but I kept getting confused. So, let me try and get this straight. Sam and Sirius like eachother. Sam thinks he likes Mel, who really likes Remus, who also likes her. Mel thinks that Remus likes Sam. Sam decides to make Sirius jealous so she asks Remus out. Sirius gets moody, but wants a date, so he asks Melanie to go to Hogsmeade with him, but she rejects him. Sirius decides to make Sam jealous by flirting with Melanie. Is that about right? Anyway, luv the fic, keep up the great writing!

Author's Response: *applause* you are extremely talented! it took me a little while to get it too! ~SM

Reviewer: theIotherIweasley
Date: 12/07/06 15:50
Chapter: The Halloween Party

great chapter but i soo think that melanie and sirius and lupin an sam are sooooo great together. you should deff work out a twist where they fall for eachother instead of their bestfriends partners

Author's Response: um...

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