Oh my god please write a new chapter!!
ohhhhh u better get that next chapter up soon!!! I JUST CANT LEAVE IT AT THAT
ohhhhh u better get that next chapter up soon!!! I JUST CANT LEAVE IT AT THAT
awww Jamie's scared. He like completely ruined it for himself by trying to make her jealous. It never works!!! Oh poor Jamie. I think I love him a little too much. haha:)
I get it. It so makes sense and totally seems like something Sirius would do.
wow you're really good!! keep it up!
i absolutley hate the names youve chosen for this fic
he was flowing like milk.....weird.
wow i love it you wrtie beautifully keep ity going im in suspence
Well seeing as how this has been updated in a long time, I doubt that you're going to finish it. But if you did, I would be extremely happy! I love this story and want to find out how it all comes together!
Ah! The pain of not knowing what is going to happen next is killing me! I know it's hard to write fast and well at the same time, but if it is at all possible, please do so!
Ah! The pain of not knowing what is going to happen next is killing me! I know it's hard to write fast and well at the same time, but if it is at all possible, please do so!
Are you going to write more? It's such a good story and i really love it.
are you going to keep writting?
it was soo good!
are you a fan of meg cabot by any chance? the shower scene was just like on in one of her books
Author's Response: actually i am, but i don't think i got it from that..i dunno i wrote it a while ago :D
personally I love cliches, but i'm more of a Grey's Anatomy girl myself
I love this storyline idea, It reminds me of A midsummer nights dream.
omg, this is the best lily/james story ive read!!
more!!
hey!
loved this chapter, well i loved all of your chapters! A brilliant story, im hooked! soo.. pleeease update! :D
I adore this story! I really cant wait for the next chapter! =]
Really excellent job on the humor ( "are you gay?") and the charicterization of young remus, who really dont get to see a lot of during the books. excellent!