Reviews For A Moment Like This
Reviewer: Gseeker7
Date: 02/10/08 0:34
Chapter: A Moment Like This

is it dean
i didnt kno he had green eyes

Reviewer: Gseeker7
Date: 02/10/08 0:33
Chapter: A Moment Like This

is it dean
i didnt kno he had green eyes

Reviewer: snivellus614
Date: 07/13/07 4:15
Chapter: A Moment Like This

Wonderful one shot. You captured the depth of each character, and made the story seem profound. Although it is funny, it get's annoying when authors build Ginny's characters into asarcastic...Monty Pythonish person. Do you see where I'm coming from? Probably not. What I'm trying to say is that you managed to show us how everyone had to grow up too fast, and how all relationships and characters turned darkish. Anyways, I'm rambling. You made me laugh at Remus and Tonks, and made me cry at everything else. Good job, and keep using your amazing writing talents.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! WOW! What a review! I loved it! I totally agree about the Ginny thing by the way~ are we the only people who see that?~ As for the characters, yes in a war you have to grow up faster than any one would ever want to. Ron and Hermione are so close to our hearts it seemed easiest to show that side of war using the relationship we've seen building over time into ... something unbreakable! Oh yes and Tonks, well she's a funny one isn't she! I am so glad you enjoyed this songfic, it was awesome (and difficult) to get through!!! Thank you for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: hmsoctopus
Date: 07/10/07 22:16
Chapter: A Moment Like This

omg, that was really good! I felt like I was right there. write more. ;D

Author's Response: Thank you! All my songfics are inter-related so you can check them out if you have the time! :D Thanks for reviewing! I love seeing a new review!!!

Reviewer: Sana
Date: 06/07/07 12:11
Chapter: A Moment Like This

I am really stupid! I was checking out your reviews for this and I realized I hadn't written one! Sorry! Well better late than never. I loved this one-shot! I almost made me cry! *sniffles* It was really well writen, way to go Rania!!! :)

Author's Response: Hi! You know what...I can't respond to any reviews for the story "Hear Me" so just accept this response as a double ;) I liked this one cuz Ginny was so vulnerable and brave, rushing into danger after her man, the other one is good cuz I love seeing Harry in action!

Reviewer: Kathyhermy123
Date: 11/29/06 5:37
Chapter: A Moment Like This

Very good, was this a Harry/Ginny shipper or a Dean/Ginny?

Author's Response: H/G all the way! Really now, D/G...that's just crazy talk!

Reviewer: unicorngirl22
Date: 09/24/06 6:58
Chapter: A Moment Like This

Wow. Really great story.

Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: aznprincess
Date: 09/03/06 19:29
Chapter: A Moment Like This


Author's Response: THX!!!!!

Reviewer: catalina792
Date: 07/04/06 10:51
Chapter: A Moment Like This

everytime i read this story i love it even more! you are really great at song fics =]

Author's Response: Gotta love ya! Originally I wrote this for a contest...go figure I found a knack for song fics!

Reviewer: griffindor_sweety
Date: 06/19/06 19:15
Chapter: A Moment Like This

really cute I liked it

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: xiofs13
Date: 06/08/06 1:43
Chapter: A Moment Like This

Ok after re-reading the last part i feel really stupid that i missed the whole point of Ginny running away from Hogwarts. my other review was stupid. What i really wanted to say was that this was THE BEST ONE SHOT EVER CREATED!!!!!!!!you tied in the song perfectly, and i dont even like Kelly Clarkson. Dean is a loser who gets in the way of most stories but you had him play a bittersweet role in this fic, but c'mon i mean cornering someone with a mistletoe is so stupid not to mention cowardly! if he really wanted her back then he shoulda just asked her. I liked the way you show Tonks and Lupin gettin hitched i cant imagine any other way. Though it stinks that Hermione's parents had to die i think it was pivitol to the plot. Please write more to this fic the plot line is to moving, engaging, gripping and fast to stay a one-shot 10/10
Oh yeah in my current story-in-progress Ron just Punched Dean... (it felt good...)

Author's Response: Hahahaha I love every review! As for Dean...ahhh yes, are you by any chance associated with the IHDC (I Hate Dean Club)? They are quite popular and growing outrageously in number! Besides...Dean was trying to be a little romantic...if it was Harry doing it than we wouldn't find it so silly! Oh and Lupin/Tonks! How could I not? Tonks always gets what she wants! Have you read Hear Me? It's the prelude to this. I will write more however! Thanks for such a great review (and in my Adversity fic, it was Harry who clobbered Dean! Great minds think alike!)

Reviewer: xiofs13
Date: 06/08/06 1:29
Chapter: A Moment Like This

That was pretty neat. This definitley has to be one of the most original stories ever, but forgive me for my aloofines but this story is under the 'other pairing' category so what really is the main ship?
even though i dont know that i still can say that this was very well written and ive added it to my favourites list

Author's Response: Thank you for adding this story to your favs! What a compliment!!! Actually the pairing for this story is Harry/Ginny. It's misleading at the beginning...I know!

Reviewer: EBONYeyes
Date: 05/14/06 13:47
Chapter: A Moment Like This

Wow! Moving, I love your style of writing! Keep it up!


Author's Response: Thank you! Glad to know I've got a style!

Reviewer: tonks_the_auror
Date: 04/11/06 17:33
Chapter: A Moment Like This

i'm sorry really sorry but i well god i hate being mean well i just couldn't get into ya know? but other than that it was something that lots of my friends would love. so i only give it 5 FLASHY STARS!

Author's Response: Hahahaha it's ok! You can't win 'em all now can you?

Reviewer: mrscedricdiggory
Date: 01/18/06 0:02
Chapter: A Moment Like This

write more please!!!! I love this story!!!

Author's Response: Hey mrscedricdiggory!!! I just responded to your review for Adversity!!! Hehehe! I will definately write more of this story...the plot in my head just keeps growing and growing for it!

Reviewer: honeydukeschoclate
Date: 01/14/06 20:00
Chapter: A Moment Like This

I usually don't like songfics, but this one story has given me a whole different idea of them. Maybe because I adore Kelly Clarkson, maybe because this was so beautifuly written, I don't know... The only thing I regret about this is that this is the end of the story. I really do wish we found out the H/G encounter, but alas, some things are not meant to be... This story has gotten me to go out on a spree and read all your other stories. It was that good. Better than any of the other one-shots I've read. Thank you for writing this story!

Author's Response: Well there's a good side and a bad. You will find out what happens with Harry/Ginny...but not yet! I am so happy to hear that I changed your view about songfics! I worked really hard to add detail and depth to my work...the song is really the backdrop of the story. It move's us from memory to memory! I really hope you enjoy my other stories as well!!! I'm having fun doing one-shots on the side while I write my Adversity story! Thank you for taking the time to review honeydukeschoclate! You rock!

Reviewer: UnnamedElement
Date: 01/08/06 22:10
Chapter: A Moment Like This

Wotcher! I absolutely love this. As i read through the very beginning, I was a slight confused, but as it moved on, it all clicked, y'know? I loved how you tied in all the flashbacks, and I must admit, even though I don't really *love* the song "A Moment Like This," the moment with Ginny and Dean was absolutely perfect! I got goosebumps so many times reading youR story, you wouldn't believe. May I ask, though, where precisely was Ginny returning from on the Knight Bus at the beginning? It's probably blatantly obvious and I just didn't notice. You read my submission, so you know I'm an R/T shipper. I'd like you to know that your description of Remus and Tonks' engagement topped off a brilliant day. Thank you. On a darker note, I'm glad someone finally had Hermione's parents die. I've considered doing so many times, yet I just couldn't be that evil. You pulled it off well without making it too dramatic. Go you! Anyway, I love your story. Great grammar, word use, etc., etc, as well. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thank you! I know what you mean...this songfic starts at the end of the story...kinda...sorta! ;) The moment with Ginny and Dean really seemed to work out well for the "kiss for all ages" contest. You got goosebumps? That makes me so happy! I like to hear my writing has an affect!

As for your question, Ginny was leaving Hogwarts to look for Harry! She rode the Knight Bus so she could go home and start her search there! Remember when she went running from Hogwarts after Dean kissed her? She stuck her thumb out and the Knight Bus appeared. The story starts off when she gets on the Knight Bus and she is reminescing over everything that has happened leading up to that point!

As for R/T! Of course you are (because you're brilliant! I knew they would get together!!! Hehehehe he needs someone willing to sit on him and Tonks needs someone to sit on so there we are!!!

As for Hermione's parents...yes it had to happen. Have you read "Hear Me"? It's the prequel to this story and will explain everything in more detail. Between you and me, her parents are usually in the way (in terms of her as a character!) Besides I needed something drastic to get Ron and her married! Thank you for reading and reviewing *here's to you {clicks cup} cheers!*

Reviewer: Nieriel Phoenix
Date: 01/07/06 17:31
Chapter: A Moment Like This

That was beautiful!!!! I loved it all, especially the ending. You write really well. I also liked the way you used the song. It's one of the best stories I've read. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review!!! I love that song myself...the lyrics always have more meanings than first meets the eye! (That's how I feel!) Maybe you should check out "Hear Me" the prequel, it's Harry/Ron/Hermione's version of events!

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 01/07/06 5:25
Chapter: A Moment Like This

This story is even better when you read it after you finish reading "Hear Me". Two thumbs up!!

Author's Response: You finished reading "Hear Me"!? *Checks for reviews...* Yes you did! Yay I have to go see what you thought! I really hope you enjoyed it...and you're right, this story is nice to read after that one!

Reviewer: pgeraci
Date: 01/06/06 20:21
Chapter: A Moment Like This

Great one-shot. I like the way it ties in with Hear Me, which I just read before this. And I like the way you partition the story using the lyrics. I'm really tempted to start re-reading Adversity, but I know once I start I won't stop until I've read it all again, but with school and homework to do, well..., homework can wait.

Author's Response: Hehehe thank you sooooooo much for reading and reviewing both! Most people read the stories the other way around ;) You got the story from the beginning! Bless ur soul (the re-reading Adversity comment)! Oh dear that story is rather long isn't it? And as I continue to write it...well I know it won't be over for another while! I have to tell u I used to be a teacher (kinda young for that aren't I?) when u said homework can wait my immediate reaction was :O hehehe Than again it is FRIDAY so have fun! Don't do your work last minute though!

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