I don't think harry would be so quick to break the rules even aided by Draco he always seemed more honorable slytherin or no
Author's Response: Well, it is Harry. He never paid any mind to the rules as a Gryffindor, so it doesn't really seem like he would abide by them as a Slytherin. ~Sara
Wow. Harry's still a natural. I'm very impressed on how you kept Harry so in-character. Draco seems a bit too nice if you know what I mean. I never thought that he was so nice to Crabbe and Goyle...
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, there's a reason to his being overly nice. But you won't find out till later. You'll find out more in story two and much more in later years. ~Sara
Ron and Hermione make me want to cry. Ergh.
Author's Response: That's so sad! Don't cry!
I don't like Malfoy any better. Sorry.
Author's Response: It's okay. Malfoy can be mean.
Well, Harry obviously would make a poor Slytherin...
Author's Response: He'll become a better one in time. For lack of a better term.
This makes me sad. I read the first three chapters of your second "book" so they make a little more sense, now, but that Harry would fall under any allusion that Malfoy was an ideal...companion (I hesitate to use the word "friend") makes me sad. I'll be interested to see how in the world he might have any friendship with the Weasleys...
Author's Response: It is quite upsetting if you think about the fact that he would rather be with Draco rather than two wonderful people such as Ron and Hermione. He'll be friends with Ron and Hermione, but not as much as before for obvious reasons. I hope you enjoy it!!! ~Sara
i think the names are too obvious. malfoy isnt dumb, so he could crack it if he really tried
Author's Response: yeah, i know. despite the fact they are cliche, the names are kind of funny.
I love your idea. I also like how harry stayed in charactereven if you put him in a different house.
Author's Response: his character begins to change later. no one changes instantaneously.
Author's Response: thanks! it gets better!
Author's Response: thanks!!
I was glad that this chapter was short because I was going to sleep while reading. Proof read you work before final submission.
Author's Response: this chapter was written quickly. you should continue to see that i do self-edit.
He heey.Clever,I really like your version of Harry,he's much more interesting this way,but why didn't his scar hurt when he was burning Voldemort and Q like in the book?
Author's Response: thanks!!! the reason his scar doesn't burn is the mere fact that i forgot to write it in. i completely forgot. sorry to confuse you. ~Sara
I love the story, and i'm gonnar read the sequals for sure! so just keep going!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm really glad that you liked it and that you're going to continue reading!! I hopw to see what you think! ~Sara
interesting... i was an idiot and stared to read the second one first... thats why my reveiw in the first chappie of the sequil was stupid!
Author's Response: it's okay. i'm glad you find it interesting and i hope you continue to read it!!!! ~Sara
i read the whole story and it was cool. i like the way you put draco as an okay person. i like it that he's nice, i mean i always thought he was rude, but not pure evil. it's a little sad that the trio isnt really much of a trio anymore but at least they're all still friends. now, onto the 2nd installment!!! =D
Author's Response: He's an okay person as an 11-year-old, but we'll have to see what happens as he gets older. Yeah, not much of the trio. Sad. Thanks for the review!! ~Sara
Sorry I haven't reviewed for a million years - just finished the story and it was brilliant! The last few chapters had a real tension and excitement to them. I liked how you incorporated elements of the later books - Sectumsempra and Greyback (btw - so glad Greyback is now in prison. First Lupin, then Bill, now Snape - that man deserves a good hiding!)
I also liked Malfoy was seen to have more of a character than he does in the original book - again, using traits found in later books; like the line "Malfoy even stopped holding back his tears".
Excellent stuff, I look forward to the sequel ;o)
Author's Response: Hannah (i hope you don't mind if I use your real name)!!!! Hh my god!! I missed you!!
Thank you so much!! It's definitely a lot better if Grayback is in prison away from small, innocent children! I love that line so much, and I'm glad you saw it and realized why I added it in. I was actually going to delete that at first, but decided to keep it. If Draco can cry as a teenager, I see no reason as to why he can't cry because he's in serious pain and eleven.
Thank you again!! I look forward to see what you think!! And I hope college's been good!! ~Sara
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!
for some reason, I sorta wanted Harry and Draco to be friends, I don't know why. I don't believe Draco is a bad person he's just under the bad influence of his father. If he had a different father, he probably wouldn't have turned out so bad. Draco is just misunderstood.
This story is great so far!
Author's Response: thanks!!! you make a good point about Draco and his father! it's probably true! ~Sara
hmm... if harry were an animagus, i think he'd either be a stag, like his father, or a phoenix
Author's Response: i already made up my mind that he would be a wolf, but thanks for the input!
You know....I think I have read this story before on here but I can't really remember when....I can't remember how it ends either.....oh well i guess that means more reviews and reads for you!
Author's Response: i've never posted it before now. maybe someone wrote something like it, although i've never read on like mine. i hope you do review more and tell me what you think!! happy holidays! ~Sara