Hi, I generally like Slytherin!Harry stories and I know how hard it is to find a decent reason of why he'd take Malfoy's hand or decides not to argue with the Hat, however, I think that your solution is not very convincing. After just having spend the entire day tlaking and chatting with Ron, all it takes for Malfoy is to come up, obviously insult Ron and claim he met the wrong people? turns Harry into a rather unreliable character ;-)
I hope this doens't sound too harsh, it's not meant in a bad way, I'll definitely continue reading to see how things go from here.
Author's Response: It's okay. You're entitled to your opinion. Let me just say that the first chapter was written very quickly and I just never edited it after writing the rest. There is a reason for why he shook Draco's hand, which is something that is brought up continually throughout Harry's years at Hogwarts: power. You'll see later what I'm talking about in chapter 12 The Mirror. It clears a few things up.
I hope after reading some more chapters that the story will come to grow on you! And any more constructive critism is welcomed. Thanks for the review! ~Sara
Itīs me again,
This is a great and amusing chapter.
Quote 1: George Weasley what are you doing?
What is George doing? I think this scene can be better if you describe what he is doing.
Quote 2: Ha. Youre allergic to a teacher! I wish I were.
I love that... *lol*
I think that youīll change the end. I donīt know why but I believe that the trio would find another way to unmask Quirrell. They are very close but I donīt believe that they can find this in the next chapters. They are still suspecting Snape.
The friendship between Harry an Draco is strange and after that letter Draco mistrust Harry even more. Zabini and Nott are too nice at the moment...
Author's Response: About quote one, I just wanted to have some humor, and I definitely should've added something. My mistake. For quote two: a bit more humor! I thought it was funny!
They're only eleven, that's why I wanted them to be a bit more cheerful and nice. No one is depressed at eleven. We're innocent and stupid and ignorant. But Blaise Zabinia, as well as Harry and Draco will become less so in time. Thanks for the review!! ~Sara
I didnīt want to write a review again, but I donīt believe that Slytherin is searching a Seeker in Harrys first year because in Harrys second year (original) Slytherin became a new seeker (Draco Malfoy). It is Terrence Higgs and he seemed to be not worse. Not worse enough to change him, maybe he is a seventh year and leave the team after Harrys first year.
Nevertheless a very interestig an good chapter! (I know that I have to do other things now but I canīt stop reading)
Author's Response: I think you're right, but I wanted Harry to be on the Quidditch team since he's so good at it. Thanks!! ~Sara
I like storys where Harry is in Slytherin. I donīt remember to find one in german (except my own). Iīm looking on this side since my beta began to translate and edit my story here and than I found this amasing story! (Sorry my english is not the best, but I still have some considerations about the first six chapters.)
It is all the same like in Harry Potter an the philosophers stone, the third floor, Prof. Quirrel, Snape and the friendship betrween Harry, Ron and Hermione. Except Harry is not a Gryffindor.
I donīt think that Harry and Draco are really good friends because Harry donīt trust him. They are too different. Draco has no influence about Harrys mind.
I see a chance for Harry to spy on the Slytherins and maybe to deceive Snape and Draco. But I also think, that Zabini and Nott can be a danger for that. They are both too curious.
It is a strange question, but why shouldnīt Harry go to Snape when he wish to talk to Dumbledore? Is it because Snape hate Harry and would be mistrusting Harry even more?
(I donīt know how to say it *search for a dictionary*)
I wonder how you manage the end of the first book. Harry canīt change to the dark side because than Voldemort get the philosopherīs stone. I donīt know what you ar planing to do with Malfoy so I keep reading.
Author's Response: You speak English very well actually. If you didn't say you were German, I would've have no idea.
Well, I wanted to the first story to be almost the same except for a few things and the fact that Harry's a Slytherin. The next stories will continue to change more and more dramatically. And yeah, Harry and Draco aren't that good of friends in the beginning, but later that will change.
Harry wouldn't go to Snape to talk about his problems because you generally don't talk with someone who dislikes you. I know I wouldn't. To Harry, Dumbledore is in the middle; neithor on his side or the other.
You'll just have to keep reading to find out!! Thank you so much for the review and for liking it!! ~Sara
woooohoooooo! new fav authorship coming right up!
Author's Response: yay!!! thanks!!!
lol, defiantly wonderful. Differant way your taking, but i like it!! and uhh..my next chapter was declined, but i'll edit it, you know. and i'm working on another story. just thought i'd give u an update=)
Author's Response: thanks! i can't wait to read it!! thanks for the update! ~Sara
just reread the whole thing
Author's Response: wow!! you did? very cool!!! thank you! ~Sara
A great plot that every Harry Potter fan should read.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!!! Your words are greatly appreciated!! ~Sara
No HarryxGinny? Oh, man!
Author's Response: Nope. Sorry. ~Sara
Please! I'm pleading You on my knees for Ginny/Harry relationship. It would be superb.
Author's Response: There's no way they would like each other after what happens in Year 3. And I'm not going to tell you what happens. Sorry. ~Sara
Fantastic final chapter! The bit about Dumbledore not trusting Harry was spectacular! I also got a bit of an idea about Harry's defeat of Voldemort, now that he's in Slytherin, he might get close to Voldie through more cunning, subtle means. Working as a Death Eater only to stick a knife in his back at the last minute...at the very least, I think Harry'll pick up on Occlumency...
I can't wait for the next installment. The Harry-Ginny relationship will be interesting. Will she still crush on him even though he's from deceitful Slytherin? Will he even go to the Burrow or will Malfoy spring him from the Dursleys? Ugh...I'll have to wait, I guess.
And my money is still on Draco and the trio getting along.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I like your idea of Harry slowly getting closer to Voldemort. That's interesting. And sorry, but there will be no Harry/Ginny relationship. Sad, I know. And about the houeses, well you'll just have to wait a little. It's good to know your optimistic. ~Sara
I'm so glad that Harry "appears" not to have gone all Voldemort-ish. Although it would definately be interesting if he did. It's weird to hear Draco being so nice, as well. Anyhoo, your story is FANTASTIC and I can't wait to read the sequel.
Author's Response: The real reason for Draco's being nice will come into the story much later. Sorry, but you'll have to wait. Hmm...evil Harry. Thank you!!! ~Sara
Please send me the chapter too!
My E- mail is email@example.com
Author's Response: Will do. ~Sara
YAY! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yay! ~Sara
Oh really you'll sent it? Wow! ok I really like your story a lot and I also can't wait for year2. My email is 'KeybladeWizard@satx.rr.com'
Author's Response: Yes, I'll send a part of it. And it's not a stupid part eithor. So you're in luck! I'll send it asap. Thanks! ~Sara
very good chapter. nice neding
Author's Response: Thank you, friend!!! ~Sara
YOUR THE GREATEST PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! In good time I will. ~Sara
First of all, awesome conclusion, and I cannot wait for the next installment. I'm tempted to ask you to E-mail it to me early, but I don't think I'd get far with that, lol. Anyways, looking onto this story, Year 2 was what I was looking forward to the most, so I cannot wait for that magical time in a couple of weeks. :P
Author's Response: Thank you!!!! Err...well, I won't send you the whole thing. But I'll send you a part of the next chapter. And if anyone else reads this review and wants me to send them that same part, then leave me a review saying so or an email. I can't wait for you to read it!! ~Sara
Second year ! Second year !!
Love your job !! Keep it up ;)
Author's Response: Yay!! I will!!! ~Sara
Wowies! It was a fabulous story! And I really like the title for number two! (in response to your authors note: Yes, of course I loved it and will read all the other sequels!)
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much!! Yay!! Can't wait to see what you think!!! ~Sara