Reviewer: helgaandgodric
Date: 05/28/07 18:53
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

I want to start this review with a disclaimer: I normally don't read Lily/James or Marauder era fics because of the fact that they are usually so ridden with cliches. We don't know a lot of what happened during that time, so what happens is many writers end up using the same type of scenarios. Yet, you didn't, and that really made it enjoyable to read. Instead of Lily all of a sudden realizing one day that she likes James, she admits that she should have realized it when she first met him. That, and the fact that James calls her a nickname other than "Lils," are two examples of why I love this fic. They are two examples of situations where other authors use cliches, but you don't.

Personally, though, I feel that this fic could have been longer and therefore even better. At the end, I'm a little confused. Did she really fall at James' feet, or is it a metaphor? And if she did fall, did she faint, or what? That's a little confusing for me. Also, where have her friends gone? Have they snuck off, or are they just being ignored?

Overall, I really enjoyed this fic, and feel that you've done a great job!

Kate

Reviewer: Padfoot519
Date: 05/27/07 11:55
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

that was so sweet

Reviewer: fawkeshermione221
Date: 05/19/07 14:13
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

WOW! Spectacular! I didn't really understand the beginning, but I loved the part when Lily was admitting her fears and feelings. I alos loved the whole pigeon/pheonix thing. Great job!!!

Reviewer: truelight
Date: 05/03/07 22:52
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

good story if you are making into a series or chapters it is a good beginning.

Reviewer: flyingphoenix
Date: 04/01/07 16:23
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Aaaaaaaaaaw! How cute!!!!!!! He's just too sweet! I love it!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 03/20/07 16:49
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Awwww
How cute!!!!!
Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: lily princess
Date: 02/20/07 8:37
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

very intresting you should consider a sequel

Reviewer: ellienellie111
Date: 02/12/07 15:54
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

'carrot top' is an american nickname. an english one would be "flower" or something. never carrot top. ew. as unromantic as it gets.

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 01/04/07 14:25
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Aww thats sweet! I love how insecure Lily was and how she didnt think she was worth him (or something to that effect) It feels really in character. And 'carrot top' was amusing as well I love the ending! You are a great writer

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 12/28/06 2:54
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Cute! I oved it! Very cliched and fluffy, but I loved it!

Well done, your work is great!

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 12/25/06 13:32
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Oh my gosh I've always loved this story- I cannot believe that I never reviewed this.

Simply beautiful. Such a way with words and emotions you have. Words can't describe what I think of this, just know that it's a good thing. :]

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 12/25/06 13:31
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Oh my gosh I've always loved this story- I cannot believe that I never reviewed this.

Simply beautiful. Such a way with words and emotions you have. Words can't describe what I think of this, just know that it's a good thing. :]

Reviewer: PumPkin_JuiCe22
Date: 12/13/06 14:38
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Awwwwwww that was perhaps the sweetest one-shot Ive ever heard. It was so good.AWWWWWWWWWW
~kelley

Reviewer: sweet4potter
Date: 11/11/06 14:29
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Wow! That was amazing. Very, very, very well-written. It's soo..capturing. I think that sums up both Lily and James' exact feelings. Perfect!! I love it!

Reviewer: sweet4potter
Date: 11/11/06 14:29
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Wow! That was amazing. Very, very, very well-written. It's soo..capturing. I think that sums up both Lily and James' exact feelings. Perfect!! I love it!

Reviewer: Breanie
Date: 10/25/06 17:59
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

this was so cute - i loved it!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 08/10/06 11:56
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Very romantic. Though it was the shortest story I've ever read!

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 08/03/06 19:08
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

this is honestly one of my favorite stories EVER! i love how she spills her heart out to, who she thinks, is her friends, but is really him. amazing.

Reviewer: borntoread
Date: 08/02/06 19:09
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Awww....so sweet!! So that's why she kept rejecting him, huh?:P Great job! 10

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 07/24/06 6:29
Chapter: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

love it so much!!! so sweet. you are a great author, you should keep writing!

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