Reviewer: meandmysharpie
Date: 01/12/05 23:08
Chapter: Drawing together

wow. narcissa and lucius are totally freaky. that was just weird. but the rest was awesome, and i can't wait to see what draco does!

Author's Response: thanks! yes, what will Draco do? how can he salvage his cover and deal with his parents????? prof mary

Reviewer: HpCrazyperson
Date: 01/12/05 22:59
Chapter: Drawing together

That s just plain freaky Narcissa and Lucius. Please put up the next chapter soon!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I will- though it may take a few days between submission and posting... but maybe not! thanks for your review! prof mary

Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 01/12/05 22:13
Chapter: Drawing together

Strange ? Sordid is more like it. . . Again, I fully get the heebie-jeebies from Narc-ius. . . But it's effective! The tension grows - can't wait for the showdown!

Author's Response: thanks! the showdown is on its way- can't wait to read your masq update, too- I'm going to use it as a reward for writing some of the next chapter!!!! prof mary

Reviewer: ix3HPfreak
Date: 01/12/05 22:12
Chapter: Drawing together

loved the chapter! please review soon! i cant wait to see what happenes!

Author's Response: thanks! prof mary

Reviewer: emmapotter
Date: 01/12/05 17:05
Chapter: The Front Lines

oooooo cliffhanger! kindof! i looove this story so much and i really hope that you keep up the good work and KEEP WRITING! update soon PLEASE!! :)

Reviewer: Sad4Sirius
Date: 01/12/05 16:03
Chapter: The Front Lines

hey i read it a while ago, but wasnt able to review....neways... i really thought that this story was great, and i really want to find out what is going to happen soon! ~Sad

Reviewer: ms_potco
Date: 01/10/05 23:44
Chapter: The Front Lines

i would like to say that you have the best taste in storys because the story you recomended was more then fabulouse! and every one here should read it! its my favorit next to this!

Author's Response: thanks! I love both of DeChantel's stories- they're incredible! I think I will post links to some more of my fave fanfics on the author page- I'm so happy to promote them! anyone looking for excellent tension-filled long & complete Hr/D should look for the links at my author page here... prof mary

Reviewer: TaraAnnFelton
Date: 01/10/05 20:08
Chapter: A study date?

But aren't flying carpets illegal.....Book 4 i think it says that.........Such a good story!! i love it!! I love it as in want to marry it love it!! Draco is the best!! I want to marry him too, so i guess i'll be a mormon so i can marry both him and your story....yes....that's it

Author's Response: you so so right, you know- at least about the illegality of the flying carpets... if anyone can figure out a legal way around the rules, it's going to be Hermione, though- don't you think? 9or maybe Arthur Weasley).... I'm glad that you're enjoying the story! prof mary

Reviewer: Manna
Date: 01/10/05 14:01
Chapter: The Front Lines

ohhhh. Can't wait for the next chapter you are so gifted! Is it too much to hope for another update soon???!!

Author's Response: thanks! the next chapter has already been submitted- so I guess it's just awaiting approval- keep an eye out! and thanks again for your review! prof mary

Reviewer: skaris
Date: 01/10/05 13:38
Chapter: playtime

your story is great!!!

Author's Response: thanks! prof mary

Reviewer: babe
Date: 01/10/05 10:06
Chapter: The Front Lines

OoOoO! Once again, a great chapter. Pansy better not get in the way!

Author's Response: hmmm.... yes, we'll have to see about Pansy! prof mary

Reviewer: lucillaq
Date: 01/10/05 3:01
Chapter: The Front Lines

I love this story!

Author's Response: thanks, I love it, too! prof mary

Reviewer: hpcrazyfan
Date: 01/09/05 22:50
Chapter: The Front Lines

This is a amazing story!! I love it! I'm glad they are married now. Update soon!!! I love it! Good job!

Author's Response: thanks so much for your review! I'm glad that they are married now, too. I thought it might happen in a 'bigger' way- but that's how it turned out... prof mary

Reviewer: Raven Beauty
Date: 01/09/05 21:30
Chapter: The Front Lines

I am so happy that they got married. Your story is getting sooo great. I can not wait for you to add more. It's hard to believe that Pansy has feelings. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: thanks! I'll be updating very soon! and yep, as weird as they are, Pansy does have feelings... prof mary

Reviewer: ms_potco
Date: 01/09/05 21:04
Chapter: The Front Lines

most wonderful... as usuall! i'm so happy they are married and i'm actually feeling a tiny bit sorry for pansy, wonder if she does the right thing, but still keep true to it after she finds out about the new marrige? suspence is killing me... and i love it!

Author's Response: thanks for your thoughts! I feel a bit sorry for Pansy, too- and I'm glad to read that you do, as well. I really wanted to write her as a complex character... prof mary

Reviewer: LbSoCcEr483
Date: 01/09/05 19:42
Chapter: The Front Lines

ohh hurry w/ more!! cant wait for ur next chapter! this is getting really exciting!

Author's Response: thanks! I'll be working on this story today so expect something later this evening or possibly tomorrow- the details are really starting to get intricate so it's taking me just a bit longer to keep everything straight... prof mary

Reviewer: dracolover
Date: 01/09/05 18:22
Chapter: The Front Lines

that was incredible...i can't believe Pansy may actually have a heart...or at least when it comes to draco...will she do the right thing? i guess i'll have to wait to find out...update soon!!!

Author's Response: thanks for your review! most of this story was already worked out when I started writing it- with just a few exceptions- Pansy is one of those- I'm just not sure how she'll will act in the end- it'll be a surprise for all, I suppose... prof mary

Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 01/09/05 18:19
Chapter: The Front Lines

Narcissa-Lucius is downright creepy . . . but you write them well . . . Harry's awfully sweet and I love that Ginny is her own woman . . . And I love Draco's love for Hermione, and vice versa. It's all so romantic . . . Forgive me as I take a moment to sigh . . .

Author's Response: thanks so much for your thoughts! I like a 'sweet Harry' character and a 'strong Ginny' - they do well in supporting roles... and Narcissa/Lucius is/are without a doubt my fave character(s) to write! thanks again, prof mary

Reviewer: ix3HPfreak
Date: 01/09/05 18:00
Chapter: The Front Lines

i loved the chapter! please update soon so you dont leave me hanging too long. =)

Author's Response: I'll be updating very soon- I'm itching to get back to this story... prof mary

Reviewer: meandmysharpie
Date: 01/09/05 17:37
Chapter: The Front Lines

don't leave me hanging... this was a really awesome chapter i cant wait for an update!

Author's Response: thanks for the review! and I won't leave you hanging for long- I'll be working on this story later today! thanks again, prof mary

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