Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 03/02/08 19:12
Chapter: The Letter
"and the goat gives it a sort of innovative stubbornness I haven't a word for, an ability to endure and thrive where other beasts would fade and fail." Is the word Mr. Ollivander the elder looking for "perserverance"? ;)
This was really excellent! I'm hooked! So excited to see what will transpire in some 46 chapters. I love Snape.
P.S. I was rereading PS today and suddenly came across Harry looking around in Flourish and Blott for the first time, finding a book by a certain...Vindictus Viridian! Ah ha! (Oddly enough, my very foolish first thought was "Why did JKR steal the penname of one of her fans?").
Reviewer: claymor
Date: 02/14/08 7:57
Chapter: Afterward
I have just finished the entire story...3days well spent. Well written. Great characterization. Great plot,theme, story. The ending was perfect. Thank you
Reviewer: Ancient
Date: 02/03/08 12:13
Chapter: A Bribe of Sorts
Waived, not waved, I think.
Still, one in 17 chapters. I'm impressed.
Reviewer: Ancient
Date: 02/02/08 23:37
Chapter: Getting Along
Lovely writing.
I find none of the awkwardness typical of other fics, no bad grammar, no strings of $10 words where a nickel would do.
Not only no negatives, though. Interesting, and funny just often enough.
I'd love to read more fics, but maybe the time has come to create your own world and become the next plutocrat author.
Reviewer: catgirl14
Date: 01/19/08 17:09
Chapter: The Head Girl Shows True Colours
SWEET=)!!!!
Reviewer: catgirl14
Date: 01/15/08 18:10
Chapter: Vinegar to Wine
love it =)
Reviewer: catgirl14
Date: 01/13/08 20:43
Chapter: Recovery and Revision
I LOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: catgirl14
Date: 01/13/08 14:32
Chapter: In Which Severus Redecorates, and Malfoy's Weakness Is Discovered
love it =) that was a good idea with the ceiling.
Reviewer: catgirl14
Date: 01/13/08 13:39
Chapter: The Black Feather
unhhhh... its so sad that Ink died =(
Reviewer: catgirl14
Date: 01/13/08 10:42
Chapter: Getting Along
really good chapter =) im happy that snape and james r going to try out for the quidditch team =)
Reviewer: catgirl14
Date: 01/13/08 9:22
Chapter: Soap on the Hogwarts Express
nice chapter =)
Reviewer: MissAntoinette
Date: 01/09/08 20:56
Chapter: The Letter
Ok, so I have officially read everything you have put up on mugglenet. This is because you're a really good author. I don't have much specific to say, so I'm just reviewing on this story, since it is my favorite. I now love 'young snape', which you can take credit for, since there is little about him in the books. Anyway, this has been a really refreshing change from trying to find James/Lily fics, and getting "flirt, get together without full explanation, wait for oc's to get together, add lame pranks, dances and au-ness". This is just so much better. So, congrats. And PS, are you going to finish that future triwizarding tournament story?
Reviewer: loonygirl101
Date: 01/02/08 10:47
Chapter: Afterward
My favorite story I have read yet on this site. I liked it a lot. Please continue to write.
Thanks :]
Reviewer: candyappley
Date: 12/29/07 12:20
Chapter: In Which Severus Redecorates, and Malfoy's Weakness Is Discovered
cool chapter
Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/07/07 17:26
Chapter: Afterward
That was beautiful. Really. This whole story was an absolute masterpiece and probably one of the best I've ever read on here. I mean I can't remember when I started reading this but it wasn't more than a few days ago and I'm already done! This is a great story and I have to admit I'm sad it's over. Snape is such an interesting character and I always enjoy reading about him even if it's just fanfiction and not from JKRs mouth. I also loved how you made this story completely your own but still fit it in with canon.
I know most of my reviews throughout the story sucked and were horrible but hey, if I had wasted all my reviewing energy there I wouldn't have been able to give such an awesome review (although never awesome enough as your story) here.
Anyways to wrap things up, you're a really god writer, and I think I saw that you had written some other things and I'm hoping to read some of them if school doesn't kill me with my own school supplies first.
Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/07/07 17:11
Chapter: Christmas Eve Dinner at the Malfoy Mansion
Thank you for this chapter not being so much of a tear yanker! Still a good chapter though. Ay! Next chapter is the last!
Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/07/07 16:37
Chapter: Trials
This story is full out yanking at my heart strings!
Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/07/07 16:23
Chapter: Darkness
That last bit actually made me cry! This whole chapter had me on the verge of tears but that last bit did me in! This is really good.
Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/07/07 15:48
Chapter: Monday Evening
Man, so sad.
Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/07/07 15:37
Chapter: An Office
not my favorite chapter but I still liked it
