What a wonderful story, except for the patronus thing you did a morvelous job no wonder you won a contest. This was really truly amazing! Thank you!

Glas he's feeling better and yet again you make everything fit so well.

Poor, poor Severus. Though it would have made more sense for Lily to have indeed the deer patronus and him being able to produce one and it also being a deer patronus after say, a snogging session together. But alas that will never be. And you wrote it like you wrote it.

I do commend you for not making Dumbledore out to be some scheming-two-timing manipulative old coot but he still sort of was... For the greater good my behind

You. Are. Brilliant.

He is cautious with his thoughts, but less so with his letters. I mean, he pretended (sort of) to hate Evans in his memories, but what if someone in the circle where to intercept his letter? Though his words are guarded, Voldermort would get the gist and see his lies. Poor Hadrian. But at least Sev's competent enough. And Lucious.. not so much apparently. Him being married to her for longer and all

And there is your 'name', and another wonderful chapter. Glad Snape 'got some' a shame it was Narcissa, but, what can you do.

Nice insight into his time there. Brief but complete enough.

A grudge is like a dirty mind (if exerted well) a joy forever.

Hmmm, interesting. I still find it a shame that Lily and Severus never really got a chance. A bit out there I guess but I was just thinking about it.