Your use of use of speech, to develop characterisation and further the narrative, has just got better and better as this intruigingly dark tale progresses. Keep up the fine work; your fans will be impatiently waiting for the next installment ...
This was a realy great chapter. Awsome. Hope to read more like it. 8/10
i dont think that james is gonna like when he find out malfoy is going to stay, because of what happen in chapter one!
Lol! Loved this chapter, too. This is so exciting ( sqeaking and jumping in the background). Anyway, you are a genius. So, update soon.
Yay! I can read it now! I wonder what everyone's reactions will be when they discover that Draco Malfoy's going to be staying with them. =]
Yippee! Keep going! It's amazing. I really hope Harry returns to London...
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Author's Response: It's because they haven't validated it yet, it will be soon, hopefully :)
It says access denied! =(
whaaaaaaat...you can't just leave the chapter like. Even though you did. >.< I can't wait for the next chapter, and update very very very soooooooon!!!!! Please and thank you ^-^
What is Remus doing there, did Bill tell someone?... and what exactly did the serpent cure Harry, the darkness or the injuries he have? ...well any ways is was a good chapter but it was rather short, i hope next chapter is up soon and that things get clear off and that people realize Harry and James are alive or at least just Reamus realize that so he doesn't kill them..
Ok! I'm so so so sorry, because I just decided to read the sequel. I loved HP and the Pheonix Song. I think that it was brilliant. One of my favourites. But I was kinda dissappointed by the 2nd and 3rd chapters of this story and gave up reading it. Now though, when I got the message that you updated and didn't have anything else to read, I gave it a try.
And I'm so happy that I did, because I enjoyed very much these chapters and I'm sorry fordoubting you.
So, update soon. You've captured my interest :D
awsome awsome awsome chapter!!! yay for remus i love him!!!! please update soon!!
Oh my god that is awesome!!! can't wait for the next update
I love this story and I love your other story. BUT I want to find out what happened to Harry. Please update soon!
~Pinkgirl526
good chappie! stick with harry's pov
please please please post the next chapter i want to read more and i can't wait, the story is SO good and all the suspence i CAN'T wait!!!!!! =D
i love this story. i think is a great story and i please request that you keep writen it because i can't wait till the next chapter. hoping to read from you soon.
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