Reviewer: prongs_potter_rulez
Date: 06/25/06 6:28
Chapter: A Ring of Choice

omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg mog omg omg omg omg

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 06/24/06 19:54
Chapter: A Ring of Choice

The POV doesn't matter to me as long as you write another chapter and post soon! Though Aska's mind might be interesting.

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 06/17/06 17:00
Chapter: The Dueling Room

Sorry, but this is Sara Wood under a different name, and I asked you before if I was missing something because I didn't understand what happened with James, and I have read Phoenix Song, I swear! Maybe I missed a chapter...oh well, still confused.

Author's Response: Harry finds out about James being alive when he goes to Gringotts and reads Sirius' will, when he goes back at christmas time to make out his own will and look over his accounts, he finds out that James is in Germany, just under a different name. On christmas he tell Ginny about his dad being alive and later leaves a letter to her in his will, (notice I didn't actually put the letter in the story, but I do mention it at some point at the end of phoenix song) this is how she knows where James. Hope that helped, I could give you the exact chapters but I'd have to go back and look myself. :)

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 06/17/06 16:57
Chapter: The Dueling Room

Wonderful! Sorry, but it's the only thing I can think of to say. It's well written, has a great plot, and leaves readers with a cliffhanger (darn! update soon...)

Reviewer: prongs_potter_rulez
Date: 06/17/06 16:56
Chapter: The Dueling Room

FIJI!!!!!!!!! Soz - but that would be such a cool place for them to go to ;-D!!!!! Well done on another brilliant in all ways chapter!! Update soon!!!!

Reviewer: elementalenchantress
Date: 06/04/06 18:17
Chapter: Im not a Seer!

ah! the plot thickens! keep on updating!

Reviewer: Sara Wood
Date: 06/04/06 12:55
Chapter: Im not a Seer!

Okay, did I miss something? How does Ginny know about Harry's dad? And why is Harry's dad alive? And why is Harry's dad living in GERMANY instead of with his son?

Author's Response: I think you have, have you read Phoenix Song? This is it's sequel.

Reviewer: prongs_potter_rulez
Date: 06/04/06 9:54
Chapter: Im not a Seer!

............omg update............PLZ!!!!!!

Reviewer: padfootprongs4eva
Date: 05/30/06 21:46
Chapter: Darkness is Only the Absence of Light

omg!! i cant wait until next chapter!! that is gonna be helllaaaaa awsome!!!

Reviewer: dirt_cheap_girl
Date: 05/04/06 15:24
Chapter: Here we go a wandering

wow. please update soooon this is sooo good. thanks for a wonderful 2 hrs of reading, its been great.

Reviewer: RobinIsley
Date: 05/04/06 13:48
Chapter: Here we go a wandering

hey cool, please Submit another one soon!!!

Reviewer: Sara Wood
Date: 05/04/06 11:00
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

Yes! Sequal! I loved Phoenix Song :-)

Reviewer: sahrious_ana
Date: 05/03/06 20:33
Chapter: Here we go a wandering

i almost died. i swear...i gave up hope. but YES its here! lol.

Reviewer: padfootprongs4eva
Date: 05/03/06 19:55
Chapter: Here we go a wandering

awsome chapter!! please update really really soon!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: emmad
Date: 04/25/06 2:55
Chapter: Life

i love this story; it was my first fan fic i ever read, and every aspect you have written, Black Iris, i have loved. i cannot wait until the next chapter ahs been validated: i just went to check the nex chapter out, all excited...and then it says it wasnt validated! damn.
keep writing.
Are you on Fan as Black Iris too?

Reviewer: ray8233
Date: 04/10/06 14:06
Chapter: Life

Hello just read Harry Potter and the Time of the Lost its great. Im glad to see someone wright something about Harry that makes hem a more take charge type of person. I hope he comes through this ok and stronger then he is emotionaly that is. Keep up the good work. Ive also read phonex song and loved it. LOOKING FORWORDS FOR MORE!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: emmad
Date: 02/27/06 2:06
Chapter: Life

hey black iris its emma reveiwing you again! ( i reveiwed you on Hp and the time of the lost) I like how you've set this one gets us reveiwers and readers thinking about whats gona happen...keeps us on the egde of our seat! Im sorry i write so much when reviewing you, i just think it would be more constructive for you to actually have something more than just 'Hey, i luv'd it! write more!' on a review. hmmm...just wondering... when harry finds his dad, will Ginny be inside the house-apartment thing, having already found James? that would create a good shock 4 Ginny! ur numba 1 reviewer, emma!

Reviewer: emmad
Date: 02/27/06 2:01
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

Hello my names emma, i wud just like to say that your writing is so amazing and inspiring! i luv it (but not in a obsessed kind of way!). I really can't wait for the next chapter...i hope you can publish it soon! i think you've sort of added all of the elements that could realistically happen in harry potter 7...with the exception of dumbledore being alive. i can totally see what was happening... ur use of imagery was really good! no, (ha ha) im not an english teacher, im still at school... but i just really like what you've done. you should totally think about a career or something! i really liked the way harry almost died...but i reckon he shud eventually go back to ron and hermoine, not just stand in the sidelines his whole life...what am i doing!?? your the master of creative writing! thanx for letting me imagination run wild! emma!

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 02/25/06 13:33
Chapter: Life

i've already read the chapter on, but i wanted to say that your amazing at writing!!!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Little_hoole3333
Date: 02/20/06 17:31
Chapter: Life

Oooh! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

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