awww thats really sweet. your a good writer. very nice
Oooo....very good. I enjoyed this a lot. You took an interesting angle on it, I see. I woudln't have thought about Narcissa not forgiving Lucius and hiding Draco from him...it's a possible scenario, though. My favorite part of this story was the dialogue. You wrote it perfectly. It was smooth, yet pleading. I also liked the angle of Lucius; personality that you took...a more pleading one. It was interesting to see how you interpurted that, and you did it very well. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank-you! You rock!