Reviews For King's Cross
Reviewer: JustLikeHermione_383
Date: 08/07/06 22:39
Chapter: one shot

Aww.
I really liked that. I was very cute :]

Reviewer: Pandee
Date: 05/17/06 17:29
Chapter: one shot

me like!!!! please make another!!!

Reviewer: Aethonan13
Date: 04/12/06 0:36
Chapter: one shot

One added note upon reading the other responses: I liked the flashbacks. I found them a nice break from the typical straight-forward story. They're difficult to do effectively, though, so the more of them you do no doubt the better (and smoother) they will become.

Reviewer: Aethonan13
Date: 04/12/06 0:33
Chapter: one shot

Well-written and nicely edited. I was a bit shocked that Harry was thinking about marriage a)to someone as young as Ginny is currently, and b)immediately after killing the Dark Lord. While I was greatly impressed by the quality of the writing (and especially your delicious humour!) in the first half, it seemed that you hurried through the final part, rushing Harry through any kind of reactionary grief, regrets, etc. While his time hunting Voldemort may have changed him, it might have been more believable for Harry to be showing greater concern for the fate of the wizarding world, Ginny's health, Hermione's state of mind, etc., rather than just his own personal satisfaction at the moment. Essentially a very nice story, and with some adjustments I think would be first-rate. Your style and comfort with language and story-telling is wonderful. 8 (10 upon some adjustments) -I hope this satisfies the oft-stated request for a "thorough and critical review"! (-:

Reviewer: hpfan012
Date: 04/09/06 11:13
Chapter: one shot

this story is so good! i loved it!! the only thing i didnt like was that it was a bit rushed and harry didnt seem very excited that he just killed voldemort... but the story is still awesome!! i love the Harry and Ginny relationship and this made it even better!! keep writing... maybe write a story about after harry and ginny got married or something...10/10

Reviewer: GinnysSecret
Date: 02/26/06 8:57
Chapter: one shot

OK, "I loved your story and I'm sad that it's a one-shot" definitely does NOT cover this! I do love a good Harry/Ginny Fan Fic (I'm a H/G shipper) and you know what? Harry and Ginny's names both have the same constanant/vowel pattern, a "y", and a pair of double letters. Conclusion: They're meant to be!!!!!!!!! Yay for me!!!!!!!

Reviewer: pinkpPotter
Date: 12/29/05 11:34
Chapter: one shot

I really liked this storryy. Like some other people said, I think it was odd that Harry proposed right after Hermione's parents died, but I think it showed how long Harry had been waiting to do it, so it wasn't thaat bad. I do think there could have been more about Hermione's reaction and how they comforted her, etc. Nice touch with Malfoy killing Bellatrix! I liked that you seemed to write well in character, and the dialogue was quite believable. Nice. = )

Reviewer: chudley_cannons_keeper
Date: 12/26/05 23:06
Chapter: one shot

Yes! Finally A Harry/Ginny that I like! I can hardly ever find one that I don't get bored with after the first few paragraphs. I ship Harry/Ginny, so I'm always glad to find ones like this.

Reviewer: witchymuggle810
Date: 12/19/05 9:42
Chapter: one shot

Very Cute I loved it very funm to read the only thing that i didn't like were the Flashbacks but... w/e

Reviewer: Hmmmm
Date: 12/14/05 13:13
Chapter: one shot

That was weak.

Author's Response: ?

Reviewer: prongs_potter_rulez
Date: 12/13/05 11:37
Chapter: one shot

Damn these cursesed one-shots! There too short!!! I loved your story!!! 999/10

Reviewer: prongs_potter_rulez
Date: 12/13/05 11:35
Chapter: one shot

Damn these cursesed one-shots! There too short!!! I loved your story!!! 999/10

Author's Response: Hehe, I'm working on a longer story, this is just the intro. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: potterwidow
Date: 12/07/05 15:34
Chapter: one shot

It was wierd about the proposal immediately after Hermione's parents' died, but overall a very good story. The flashbacks were interesting and the dialogue and fight scene descriptions were on target. Where did the soilder and quote come from?

Author's Response: Hey Thamks for the review! I actually had a hard time writing some of the dialogue, so it's nice to know the effort paid off. Mr. Broyles is a good frind of mine and is in the Army ROTC program here. He was talking to me one day after training and he commented about throwing grenades.

Reviewer: patronous
Date: 12/07/05 13:21
Chapter: one shot

it was pretty good. kinda weird how harry proposed right after hermiones parents died though.

Author's Response: Hey! thanks for the review...I'll remember not to put in awkward moments like that, sorry. I appreciate you taking the time to let me know!

Reviewer: PottyGirl
Date: 12/05/05 21:53
Chapter: one shot

Loved it! Full of Harry and Ginny just the way I like it. A little drama is nice too.

Author's Response: Thanks! This is actually my first try at a fic. I'm currently working on a story about Hermione that picks up where this one left off. Thanks for the review! Brownie pionts to you!

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