I really loved this chapter, as it was so intense. The way you described Malfoy's anger was phenominal, I could practically feel it radiating from the screen. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks. writing his emotions are the hardest thing for me to do, and I only want to get better at it. But im glad its good now, lol! Thanks for the review Darkwing731
please review? that's what u said. okay i reviewed so keep writing i'm loving this story!!!!!
great keep writing im moving on to the next chapter now
they kissed. AH!! AND SHE'S GONNA LEAVE HIM FOR DRACO?!?!?! ..............
well he is rather hott. but still..... ANYWHOO keep writing.
awesome chapter i loved it keep writing!
this story is so amazing. Seriously, I have read quite a few draco/hermione fanfics and this is so amazing. Definetly one of my favorites, so far.
keep up the good work
You write beautifully and you're are one of the few authors who manages to make the characters and their relationships realistic. In particular a huge thankyou for not turning Malfoy into a lovesick puppy overnight. Please update soon!
Author's Response: god I DESPISE the lovesick Malfoy! I COULD KILL HIM MYSELF. Anyways, Malfoy will NEVER be that way in this story, lemme assure you! I try so hard to make their personailties work with the actual characters and the plot I have a hand, so yeah. Im trying! Thanks for the review! Darkwing731
Just poitintg out again that Dumby died..... sorry, I kow it seems like I'm looking for faults, I'm not, I just notice them, and I hasve to point it out before I explode...
I love your detail. Everything I read I see a movie of, but this probably gives me mor3e acuracy of what you picture. As usual, I see a movie in my head when I read.
Author's Response: Yes, I do know that he died, but like I said in the summary, this story is PRE-Half Blood Prince. That itself should say something, dont you think? Thanks for the review. Darkwing731
I like it, it's great, REALLY awesome... except for Luna being OOC and liking Neville. She's a little tooo OOC, you know? I know you meant it to be that way, but Luna really would never be like that. Just a point I'm making. By the way, do you ike LunaNeville or do you just think it's going to happen? Becasue JK ruled it out.
Other than that, I love your story. It's very descriptive, and you can really picture it in your head properly, and everyone besides Luna is In charachter.
Author's Response: I dont ship Luna/Neville, I just threw the couple in at last moment. I probably wont even feature their relationship in the story, unless I have a fight or something. Darkwing731
hurry up with the nex page! I really can't wait.
wow...dude...I could FEEL her terror...that was so good! I had to get a blanket to stop the chills! Encore!
ooo nightmares!!! umm...yay? haha I liked it! way to go!
aww!!! I loved it! "Potter, you will die tonight" that's the best, right there! haha, Keep going!
wow, I adored the ending with Ron and Hermione's sweetness! Can't wait to read the rest!
its so good! hurry and write the next chapter, i'm on the edge of my seat and i cant wait to find out what happens next!!
I absolutely love this story. It's canon, not the whole draco-and-hermione-hook-up-on-the-first-day-of-school thing. It shows what draco's emotions would really be like, and Hermione would react to them. I do respect the Hermione/Ron bit because Hermione does need some type of comfort besides Ginny, because from what I read, this task is diffcult. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: THANK YOU. Not a lot of people seem that Hermione finds comfort in the boys, and just UGHRELH Ron is SO important in this plot!! *throws tantrum* Thank you for recognizing him as a character and not someone who gets in the way of Draco and Hermione. And I hate that utter cliche, it KILLS me whenever I read about it. Lol. Im ranting. Anyways, thanks so much for the review! Darkwing731
I really like this story. It's pretty different from the D/H fics i've read! And I like it. Keep up the great work!
Great story! In the real world its called intruding on a private moment. I love Hermine's determination to get to the bottom of whatever's eating at Malfoy(Gilbert Grape). Just out of curiosity, is Malfoy a werewolf? He sure acts like one.
Author's Response: Hah, no, Draco isn't a werewolf, just severely traumatized and some other stuff... he's all wizard though, no werewolf in him.
that was brilliant! more! encore! plz update soon!!!!