that was really sweet. im glad someone saw the good in barty crouch sr. he was just trying to do what he thuoght was best by keeping his son locked up, even if he was harsh about it. i loved this story. keep writing!
Author's Response: Poor Barty, he never gets credit for being a decent guy. *sigh* I was surprised to get another review for this, but I'm far from complaining. Normally I'm not one for surprises, but I liked this one...thanks bunches! ^_^
That was great! I've never seen Crouch like that, before... you actually made me feel sorry for him, so you must be great :) I really enjoyed this! It was great!!! SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius-Yeah, I'm writing a respose to this challenge, too... I still haven't typed it up yet, though...
Author's Response: Woo, thanks! I've always felt really bad for Crouch, is that just me? I wanted to show the softer side of Crouch -- dunno if it worked. Thanks so much, and GOOD LUCK with your response!
Hey, first to review! I just wanted to say that I loved your story! I myself am writing a submission to this challenge (though I doubt it'll finish in time) and your is so so much better! The description of the house and the ending were perfectly perfect. I hope you get the points for this challenge!
Author's Response: Ooh, good luck with your submission! I'm sure it will be fabbity. Thanks so much for the review and the kind wishes! ^_^